If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
A man is known not merely by the goals he set, but more importantly, by the goals he achieve. What constitutes an intellectually successful life is the attainment of goals and fulfillment of visions as set by a man. But do we, in order to achieve the objectives we all desire, give ourselves away to any means or resort to any methods to attain it? No, for successful achievement of a desired purpose, one should not only have a definite set of goals, but also the right and justified means to achieve it.
An unsuccessful attempt in any venture is better than achieving it through unfair means. Quite often, we human beings are tempted to undertake certain mal-practices which help us achieve our goal faster and easier way. Adopting such chicanery will no doubt help us achieve our set target in an easier fashion; we however can never thereafter credit for honesty. Our values of ethics, which undoubtedly crosses our conscience every now and then, will make us face a conflict with our own inner self. The world may see us achieve great heights, but it is with our own selves that we stand to lose.
Many a times, our goals are achieved at the cost of imparting harm to others. Do we consider such an achievement a satisfying one? No. When a politician climbs up the top of the ladder deceiving people, what he sets is nothing but an impending doom to the future of the politics. Rival industries may often supersede others in business by bringing forth harmful strategies to other competing companies; high aiming multi-national companies may exploit nature and its resources to an unprecedented extend to achieve profits and players often consciously cover up mistakes to win a match. These are few common examples where one party benefited at the cost of the other, but we stop and ask a question here. How long can one achieve success or realize goals by embracing such false methodologies? Can we assure our inner selves of the success we have achieved?
This goals, when resorting to extreme and unfair means, are achieved on a short term basis; however such success is volatile. For a continuous growth, achievement and setting a purpose of life, we need to adhere to certain ethical standards, set not only by others, but guided by our own sense of morality and duty. An achievement of a goal is worthy enough only when it pertains to betterment of self and asserts a sense of moral value. A tainted success is a covert failure.
Attaining worthy goals indubitably gives one a sense of completeness and satisfaction, let alone extolled by popularity, eminence and praise; the sense of achievement however becomes sojourn when our minds are over-shadowed with the gloomier thoughts of the unfair means we had resorted to. Thus, for a goal to be worth in its name, one must embrace only those methods which are acceptable morally, ethically and socially. Honesty goes a long way, but comes at a greater price.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'achieves'.
Suggestion: achieves
..., but more importantly, by the goals he achieve. What constitutes an intellectually suc...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t and justified means to achieve it. An unsuccessful attempt in any venture i...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...hich undoubtedly crosses our conscience every now and then, will make us face a conflict with our ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur own selves that we stand to lose. Many a times, our goals are achieved at ...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...t we stand to lose. Many a times, our goals are achieved at the cost of ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ves of the success we have achieved? This goals, when resorting to extreme an...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...uccess we have achieved? This goals, when resorting to extreme and un...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inted success is a covert failure. Attaining worthy goals indubitably gives...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2429.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 505.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8099009901 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76622677798 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548514851485 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2142856392 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.608695652 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9565217391 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30434782609 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11780858484 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387435116097 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482046631671 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805453184344 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068850626457 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.