"The most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little."
As old adage says, " leaders are the root of the nation, they build and flourish it", this is conspicuously true. leaders are the people of a nation that must take fair amount of decision to sustain peace and harmony of the country. thus, leaders should have consistency in their thought while making any decisions regarding any policies of country. many people look up to them as an inspirations, they are luminaries of the society and thus, its their duty to make a image of paragon for their compatriots. The prompt suggests that only those leader will be considered as effective, who are consistent in their principles and objectives. those who are fickle in their principles and objectives are less likely to progress. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the prompt and argue that leader should have consistency in their principles and objective to achieve better results in following two reasons.
To begin, people usually consider thier leaders as an prototypes and why not? they are in the positions in which we consider them as public figures and take part in their lives vicariously. thus, we look for their works and praise it if they are good and condemn if they are bad. For instance, Mahatma gandi of india is source of inspiration to many people around the world. His non-violence approach toward the ruthless british empire made india to establish largest democracy in the world. such iconoclastic figure like him not only make great impact but also provide an ideal examples for people to follow. His consistent objectives and principles has made him immortal in the history of indian books. On the other hand, German Nazi opressive dictator Adolf Hitler is another figure considered as pargon of vice which is due to his own intransigent objectives and principles which made niche for himself in the history.
Secondly, Although leader must be consistent in his principles and ideology, it doesn't mean he or she should disregard any potential suggestions. As principles are made by man not principles made man, thus sometimes leader should consider other possibilities too rather than being fanatic. it is true that every human doesn't know everything, thus leaders also should consider the suggestions from the other supports too. while it is evident that leader should not be fanatic, but once he or she makes a decision must remain adhere to it and should not be influenced by any oppostion party otherwise the effectiveness of the decision can be questioned.
Finally, when people are not happy with the inconsistent principles and objectives of government and leaders, there is likely to be revoult, agitation and defiance of government decisions. history provides myraid of examples associated with this context. For instace, French revolution was one of the prime cause of due to unscrupulousness shown by louis 17. His government was intransigent and unreceptive of public and poor people suggestions, rather there was taxation on them which caused revolution to overthrwow the kingdom of louis the seventeenth. Similarly, King of Iran was overthrown due to his inconsistency in his thought, didn't had any effective plan for welfare of people rather he became affluent. this demagoguery is not tolerant, and history is evidence of it. thus, leader should not became completely tenacious in their belief rather must welcome any fruitful suggestions.
Of course, some might argue that those who has rigidity in their thought will accomplish little and it hinders overall growth of the country. if it is so, then obviously leader might be considered as zealous, but eventually people will tend to realize in the near future as why he was taking such tenacious positions and gandi is perfect example of it. At first, no one believe to his non-violence approach but at last they had to accept the fact that his consistency was prime reason to remove india from clutches of british empire. thus, after making reasonable decision; leader should remain intransigent in his principles and objectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, thus, while, for instance, of course, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 33.0505617978 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3383.0 2235.4752809 151% => OK
No of words: 659.0 442.535393258 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13353566009 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06665523852 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81147208376 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 215.323595506 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465857359636 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1056.6 704.065955056 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1700753402 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.766666667 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9666666667 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63333333333 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180346850033 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541513594762 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526038868862 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109736833519 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557941652863 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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