If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Goals can be of varying levels like individual goals, society, nation, or worldwide goal. For some achieving them through the correct path is the only way whereas there are others who would not hesitate once in doing harm to others in order to achieve their goals and desire. The goal for a student might be to score the highest score in his/her class whereas for a slave trapped in treacherous servility for years it is to be free. According to me, it is good to be determined to reach one’s goal but it is equally important that we do not go against the set norms to achieve it.
Firstly, it is admirable people dreaming big. Like it is always said one should aim for the stars then only one can at least reach the moon. But does it still remain admirable if one pursues unacceptable and unwarranted methods to achieve them? To illustrate a government job aspiring student is determined to get through the exams and help his /her society. The student believes that he/she can make great improvements and do a lot good for the welfare of the society but he is not sure enough that he/she can go through the exams. In the meantime he/she gets to know that the paper is leaked, he/she buys the paper and clears the exams. Is the method fair enough, he/she might have taken the seat of another deserving student who worked day and night. Even though the student goes up to do great to society the way used by him can not be justified in any way. Having a correct intension to serve the nation was acceptable but the route to it was not desirable.
In addition to this, it is highly possible that one’s goal clashes with another person’s goal. In this case, it is highly unwarranted that for our own good we destroy the other person. To illustrate my point, Consider Hitler whose main goal was to unify entire Germany and make it the supreme power in the entire world. He was pro Germans. He wanted more representations of Germans in all the fields of jobs as well as in bureaucracy. Though, his goal was in the goodwill of the Nazis can this be a reason enough to kill hundreds and thousands of innocent Jews. Jews were burnt alive and their home, family everything was taken away from them and they had to live in fear for many years. Hilter’s action and treatment were inhuman and is a method that by destroying a single trace of Jews they can get their lost glory back was unjustified. He could have tried other methods like educating Germans or setting up industries to generate more jobs or increased their trade routes to increase jobs for Nazis.
Not denying the fact that it becomes sometimes utmost importance to think for yourself and ignore the world in order to achieve your goal. There are people who could very proudly claim that it is important to do whatever it takes and in the path of success, one always has to make sacrifices. On reaching the top these unjustified actions would not matter much. However, the loss of satisfaction and mental peace. The inner guilt in the consensus though not in the present time but it will and definitely come back to people.
In conclusion, it is important to have goals in life and also equally important to be firm and believe that one will do all in his power to achieve the goal until it is justifiable. Harming and destroying others would spoil the entire motive and would not provide one with reason strong enough to realize their success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Goals can be of varying levels like individual goal, society, nation or worl...
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...s servility for years it is to be free. According to me, it is good to be determined to reach o...
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...she buys the paper and clears the exams.Is the method fair enough, he/she might ha...
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...ugh, he/she might have taken the seat of another deserving student who worked day...
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...r Nazis. Not denying the fact that it becomes sometimes utmost importance to think for yourself...
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...justified actions would not matter much.However, the loss of satisfaction and mental pe...
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...ime but it will and definitely come back to people. In conclusion, it is import...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, then, well, whereas, as for, as to, at least, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 33.0505617978 206% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2805.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 612.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97379470361 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44050802085 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482026143791 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 870.3 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.436288814 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872971450108 0.243740707755 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258524965595 0.0831039109588 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239703951746 0.0758088955206 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535690067631 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128717878523 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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