imagination is more important than imagination
What is more important knowledge or imagination? Many of us will say both are important as they are contingent on each other .Yes it is obvious that there is relative relationship between them but according to me Imagination is more important than knowledge.
Knowledge is like building and imaginations are it's pillars .knowledge is build open pillars that is on imagination .Every great book writtens ,every great pieces of art ,every discovery of sciences solely depends on imagination .From this imagination knowledge of a particular type had been extracted .Examples of great authors like J.K.ROWLING ,scientists like Albert Einstein ,Graham bell ,Bright Brothers ,etc are enough to view that imagination overpasses knowledge.
Centuries ago, many scholars were there having knowledge of almost everything but none of them thought of why particular thing falls down only and not goes up. Sir isaac Newton famous English physicist and mathematician who is popular for his gravitational law, and law of motion observed the fall of apple on the orchard. Then what? He went to the deep imagination to find out the reason of why all objects including apples fall downward. Due to his imagination, he finally derived laws of gravitation. Today, all his laws are presented as knowledge .Now, this imagination of great scientists has become knowledge of fundamental science. This knowledge was the result of great imagination.
Another example of great personality ,Alexander Graham Bell, scientist, innovator and engineer who invented Telephone .This discovery is solely based on imagination of graham bell who imagined to change the way people communicate .Two centuries ago it was universal truth that to hear one person one has to be in specific area .However ,this great invention change the world we communicate this discovery is all about ones imagination .Further, examples are Wright Brothers invention of air plane which changed the mode of transportation. How one can thought of flying like bird? Yes it become possible due to great vision and imagination of their inventors. One striking example of it is how one can capture the moment that had been lived it was unbelievable before the invention of cameras. There are n numbers of example which shows it is imagination of one that had great impact on humanity.
Not only in field of science but also in arts and literature we can see the power of imagination .The best examples are shakesspeare stories which had been part of many movies of today.
Summing the point imagination is more important than knowledge .Above mentioned example clearly states that imagination of great scientists and artist changed the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, then, as to, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24651162791 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91246365894 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541860465116 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 139.114450902 60.3974514979 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.0 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 7.80617977528 448% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380217310462 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138239758445 0.0831039109588 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163725807925 0.0758088955206 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254110206357 0.150359130593 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168558435489 0.0667264976115 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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