The increasingly rapid pace of life today cause more problem that it solves.
In an upgrading world, no one has time to relax, spent time with school friend memorise the child day. instead current scienario, people are made race in between them, those who run more fast have got more success. defination of success may fail due to an rapid pace of life. I agree with given statement, stated that The increasingly rapid pace of life today
cause more problem that it solves.
In increasingly rapid pace of life, man drawn number of good invention, even though he got popularity. apart from this man fail in an humanity because of his attitude, rudeness and behaviour. Let's compare earlier days example, Before taking any decision people first discuss in between then drawn conclusion. so decision have good output because of opinion from peoples.In an current situation it different scenario, people are not discuss in between take decision which may fail.
In any sector, rapid pace to be held which can't stop the person life. person may involve more and more in depth, so he has not way to move away form this cycle. Even though he may upgraded with growing world, various problems, challenges he daily face. In an organisation employee face daily new challanges which cause him problem, it also affect on both mental as well as physically to person.
Person involve in some idea, he may search thoroughly face challenges whether he got answer or not it's different aspects. but he still wake up, take daily task seriously up to getting result. In private sector, thinks are now not easier it face difficult. so without expecting solution just done work regurously, it's only solution to person.
It's acceptable argument such that more involvement leads to more complexity instead showing an output.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...h school friend memorise the child day. instead current scienario, people are made race...
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...ho run more fast have got more success. defination of success may fail due to an rapid pac...
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.... defination of success may fail due to an rapid pace of life. I agree with given ...
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...he increasingly rapid pace of life today cause more problem that it solves. In...
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...vention, even though he got popularity. apart from this man fail in an humanity becau...
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...popularity. apart from this man fail in an humanity because of his attitude, ruden...
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...f his attitude, rudeness and behaviour. Lets compare earlier days example, Before ta...
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...scuss in between then drawn conclusion. so decision have good output because of op...
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...tput because of opinion from peoples.In an current situation it different scenario...
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...any sector, rapid pace to be held which cant stop the person life. person may involv...
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...e held which cant stop the person life. person may involve more and more in depth, so ...
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...langes which cause him problem, it also affect on both mental as well as physically to...
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...langes which cause him problem, it also affect on both mental as well as physically to pe...
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... problem, it also affect on both mental as well as physically to person. Person involve...
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...ot answer or not its different aspects. but he still wake up, take daily task serio...
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Suggestion: wakes
...not its different aspects. but he still wake up, take daily task seriously up to get...
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...te sector, thinks are now not easier it face difficult. so without expecting solutio...
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...s are now not easier it face difficult. so without expecting solution just done wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, then, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 289.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48655825332 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608996539792 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0681326277 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259186432873 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900042687262 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141314304441 0.0758088955206 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160426872297 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118311434141 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.