Should student bear the full cost of higher studies rather than the provision of government funded education? give your opinion on this topic?
Higher studies involve money which is funded by government or either student bear cost of education. There are several scholarship available by government which lead to student to fulfill their career dreams.
In most of cases, because of expensive higher education fee structure student unable to take in admission in well known university. The government provides scholarship on tuition fee, so that student have to manage the other expenses such living, meals. These are very much beneficial to particularly low income group having talent, intelligence and scored mark.
It will unable to country to churn out large number of knowledgeable and qualified graduates which in turn will enable the country to industrialize and progress rapidly. The technology to implemented in own country such way that it improve economy and standard of country.
There are several drawback, sometime students may not be serious about their studies as they are paying anything. Many may not complete their education and percentage dropout to be high. If they fund their own education, they would be serious and would study something related to their interest. Their percentage of drop it lead to wastage of fund on education.
The country face the problem of 'brain drain' with people whose education the country has funded going to abroad for better job and career opportunities. It may lead problem country at shortage of man power who are knowledgeable and intelligent.
In conclusion, government encourage student for higher studies but those who have focused goal and ability to pursue higher education. They may put criteria before providing funds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: most of the cases; most cases
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...ir studies as they are paying anything. Many may not complete their education and percen...
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...r interest. Their percentage of drop it lead to wastage of fund on education. Th...
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...ay put criteria before providing funds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37837837838 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77224916876 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0909776123 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189017521166 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667920940878 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807390987624 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100583907435 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796839142735 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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