To what extent do you agree or disagree with the following statement: We can do away with our tradition and culture since we have achieved enough technological progress?
Change is only permanent things. Technology invention innovate human to think differently. While handling through different technology human left back his tradition and culture. I Partially agree with given statement we can do away with our tradition and culture since we have achieved enough technological progress.
Technical invention such as e-mail, internet, cell phones in such way that it can reduces error, time delay. Time delay is one factor which in past years, one of major drawback. It's takes to much time to sending some one letter, greeting cards through post medium.
In considering travelling, technical invention in automobile sector plays major role. People earlier days, prefer to travel from one point to another point through bullock carts, horses, cycles. These technology implemented in such way that it reduces human effort by introducing various modes such as car, train, aeroplane.
While considering technology, there are also negative point. The life of human being very stressful, they lives their life in very compact manner. While comparing with past years, it's totally opposite in which people mostly prefer simple life, they are very much used to their work. They survive with every one in happy manner.
Now days, there are variety of junk food introduces which impact on health of human being. They are not strong enough to stay strong enough in any epidemic situation. In comparison with people such as our grand father, or even our father they use to take home cooked food, daily healthy diet. Their regular eating style made them strong enough in such way that they can work independently at their 80's.
In conclusion, technology upgrade day by day it's need to human to upgrade. It's depends upon person to person how he use technology, whether he over dependent or not. Otherwise technology take control of human minds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...et, cell phones in such way that it can reduces error, time delay. Time delay is one fa...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...years, one of major drawback. Its takes to much time to sending some one letter, g...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'These technologies'?
Suggestion: This technology; These technologies
... through bullock carts, horses, cycles. These technology implemented in such way that it reduces...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...ife of human being very stressful, they lives their life in very compact manner. Whil...
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Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...ng enough in any epidemic situation. In comparison with people such as our grand father, o...
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Line 9, column 244, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...r grand father, or even our father they use to take home cooked food, daily healthy...
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Line 11, column 167, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...logy, whether he over dependent or not. Otherwise technology take control of human minds....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22591362126 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49007699447 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611295681063 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3795245466 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.9047619048 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04761904762 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219034964324 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610761219782 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159554301651 0.0667982634062 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115935792669 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175245555595 0.056905535591 308% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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