The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Problems are the imperative part of peoples' lives. Without problems, a person would not be capable to burgeon his/her growth. People faces problems quite often and try to overcome them by coming up with innovative solutions to ensure ease in their lives. Moreover, with the increased technology enhancements, people are facing several issues in coping up with the upcomming technologies. Therefore, in today's world, people are prone to come across several difficulties in their lives.
It is not an ideal world, that every individual's minds are homogenous. That means, every person thinks differently. Each one has a different pace of learning and grasping the knowledge. Some could learn faster, while some takes a lot of time to understand the issue. Additionally, the world is not equipped with complete litracy rate. A hierarchy of people are presents in the world, where people understands anything at their own pace. Technology, for example, is complicated for every individual. Mobile phones seems lucid for the younger ones', however, elder ones' take time to understand it's functionalities. Even after continuous teaching, the elder people do not completely gets use to it and make mistakes. Consiquently, the upcomming new updates in the mobile phones makes it more difficult for them to comprehend.
In addition to this, the technology uses an iterative approach. Mobile phones, for instance, get into the markets. People buy these mobile phones and gets use to it after some time. However, the mobile phone companies broach up an update that fixes some bugs in the mobile phones yet increasing some other problems. People who were accustomed to the previous versions have to learn the new update and would have to get used to it. Additionally, this gets increasingly difficult for the elder people because of their reduced learning capabilities. Indeed, it's true that increase pace of life causes several problems than it solves.
In contrast to this, it's entirely untrue that increased pace of life hasn't brought up positive effects in lives. Earlier, when people wants to travel a longer distances they use to walk on foot, or they want to talk or communicate to their relatives they use to send letters which takes longer time. But, now people have the facilities of airplanes, motor vehicles, motor bikes for travelling and have telephones, internet, mobile phones to communicate from one pole to another. Hence, the rapid pace in lives of people not only comprises of disadvantages.
One should think in this way that with the advancement in the technologies every individual must think to improve themselves and to fit themselves with the upcomming challenges.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
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Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...wants to travel a longer distances they use to walk on foot, or they want to talk o...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... or communicate to their relatives they use to send letters which takes longer time...
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Line 7, column 530, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23897911833 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82573461901 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53596287703 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4967531098 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6296296296 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.962962963 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59259259259 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139697181457 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417096592565 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811253133565 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669620345875 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437375856509 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.