The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
The world has been changing dramatically with the advent of technology and science.
The emerging technology has undoubtedly made people's lives easier. Humanity has been offered in a number of ways as a result of the innovations that adapt almost every other day. While there are a few disadvantages, humans, in my opinion, have been benefitted heavily with the access to technology and science.
People are benefitted in a variety of ways by their modern lifestyle. First and foremost, people do not have to do tedious tasks, which have wasted the precious time of their ancestors. For instance, women, a few centuries ago, have to travel miles and miles to fetch water for their everyday use, while women of today have access to fresh water 24 hours a day. Similarly, a modern men need not waste his precious time and exploit his livestock animals to cultivate a piece of land, when he has access to advanced farming equipment. Secondly, modern humans have access to better health. To illustrate, average life expectancy of modern men and women have risen to well above 70 years from less than 40 for our ancestors. This reflects that modern humans are living a heathier that their posterior generation. Last but the least, people to today world have better overall lifestyle; they have more more money than their ancestors, improved home facilities- electricity, modes of communication, modes of travel, insurance, etc.
However, this does not mean that lives of modern men and women are perfect. There are a few problems with the rapid pace of life has brought with it. Firstly, people are becoming more and more greedy. For example, many people in the hope of making more money so that they can spend more on leisure activities are now juggling between two or more jobs. And juggling between the jobs is resulting in stress and exertion. However, people should realize the implication of a stressful life and consequently they should manage their expectations.
To sum up, rapid face of life has been a boon to humanity in many ways. And just like everything, it has its own few advantages. However, it is up to humans to realize their limits and save themselves from the few harms of modern lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'man'?
Suggestion: man
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Suggestion: more
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Message: Use only 'more' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: more
...ave better overall lifestyle; they have more more money than their ancestors, improved ho...
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93048128342 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63243950885 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51871657754 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5442530097 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8095238095 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52380952381 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143772425654 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410662310963 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064403521946 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651030993795 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711358042022 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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