The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Leaders are the people who have the ability to inspire others to perform beyond their potential. A nation's leader has the biggest responsibility of working against all odds to achieve equality, prosperity and better opportunities for its people. Thus, I strongly agree with the prompt's idea that general well-being of the people of a certain country is the key indicator of the effectiveness of its leader. The following are the three reasons to corroborate my stance.
First of all, the best way to assess a person's work is to evaluate how well he execute his responsibilities. For instance, the CEO of a company is evaluated of his capability to drive company towards profitable path while preserving the moral and ethical standards of the company. In the same way, the leader of any country is going to be judged by his ability to provide its people with better opportunities. Implementing effectively policies that can improve their lives. To provide an example, Nelson Mandela, the president of the south africa, fought tirelessly to bring freedom and equality to its people. Thus, a leader has to go to greater depths to work for the rights and needs of its people.
Secondly, a leader might be good in theory and at delivering speeches, but it is when a leader turns his vision into reality, he becomes great and successful. Leaders come and go but only few leave their mark on the world with ther accompolishments. This is best reflected in the massive work of Abraham Lincoln who emanicipated the black people from slavery and gave them a respectable status in America. His work was an embodiment of freedom, self-government and equality. Thus, the efficacy of a leader is best reflected in actions they take and not just the framework they create.
Thirdly, the most important determinant of the sucess of a country's leaders are its citizens. Its the people ultimately who get to decide if their leader was effective or not by casting their votes. So, it is in the best interest of the leader to commit himself towards uplifting the lives of his people. While others might argue it is a impossible task to appease everyone, however, that's not the point. The point is to work towards the society. And history proves it, time and again, that good work never go unnoticed. Abraham Lincoln, Martin Luther jr, Mahatama Gandhi all have been celebrated as the heroes of the world, and yet they were all assassinated by someone who disliked their great work. However, it didn't harm their reputation in any sense. The best judge of the work of a nation's leader is its citizens and thus, their well-being stands prime.
I do acknowledge that a leadership incorporates many skills and thus a leader can be assessed by other means, nonetheless the general well being of the people is the basic and foremost duty of a leader and if he fails at that, nothing else matters. All the greatest leaders of the world are great for one simple reason- they put humans first. All these leaders, in some way, benefited humanity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...rs to perform beyond their potential. A nations leader has the biggest responsibility o...
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Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'prompts'' or 'prompt's'?
Suggestion: prompts'; prompt's
...people. Thus, I strongly agree with the prompts idea that general well-being of the peo...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'executes'.
Suggestion: executes
...persons work is to evaluate how well he execute his responsibilities. For instance, the...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun leave seems to be countable; consider using: 'few leaves'.
Suggestion: few leaves
...uccessful. Leaders come and go but only few leave their mark on the world with ther accom...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...of a countrys leaders are its citizens. Its the people ultimately who get to decide...
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Line 7, column 337, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... people. While others might argue it is a impossible task to appease everyone, ho...
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Line 7, column 385, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ible task to appease everyone, however, thats not the point. The point is to work tow...
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Line 7, column 715, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... disliked their great work. However, it didnt harm their reputation in any sense. The...
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Line 7, column 789, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... sense. The best judge of the work of a nations leader is its citizens and thus, their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, first of all, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2512.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85880077369 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76583976701 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516441005803 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 791.1 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.338025638 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.037037037 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1481481481 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.37037037037 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16356991145 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468737377613 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582278099254 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107489272301 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259119150333 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.