It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
I mostly agree with the given prompt that a tendency to compromise one's belief could turn more harmful to a person because of two
major reasons, however, I do concede that in some cases, the person might be better off listening to suggestions and letting go of his own belief.
First of all, a person is the best self-critic, and in the best position to self-judge in term of viability of the choosen option. Life is full of twists and turns, which pose a dilemma to decide whether to go with self- belief or adopt other's suggestions. For instance, recently, the employees of largest power utility firm in Nepal came across a confusing situation in which they had to select between the pay raise, or flexibility in working hours. While the pay-raise might sound like the undisputed winner, most of the employees who initially opted the pay-raise option, later submitted the re-application within a few days to choose the option of flexible working hours. It signifies the importance of being able to follow own belief instead of following the trend or peer pressure. Else, in a long run, it might turn harmful in some unforseeable ways.
Moreover, belief is directly associated with the confidence, which in turn is very important factor for success. For instance, if a person initiates a business that he adores and believes to flourish, the person naturally puts all his effort for its success. The positivity plays a vital role in raising the overall mood and success rate of the task. On contrary, if a person is made to initiate something that he is not naturally inclined, the effort might not be as effective as it should have been. This might have a harmful impact for the person involved and compromise the success rate of the task.
However, in some cases, the person might be over-confident, and over estimate the capability. This might pose an extra dimension of escalation in the belief. The best way to mitigate it might be to let go the entrenched belief, and welcome new suggestions from a trusted person. A right balance between holding on self-belief, and incorporating useful suggestions when needed might be the right way to success.
To conclude, self belief is an integral part of the confidence that a person has for himself. So, it might turn harmful to neglect or compromise it. Believing in self, and keeping it in check by means of critical suggestions is the best way to ensure success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...en prompt that a tendency to compromise ones belief could turn more harmful to a per...
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Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... more harmful to a person because of two major reasons, however, I do concede tha...
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Line 4, column 296, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the largest'.
Suggestion: of the largest
.... For instance, recently, the employees of largest power utility firm in Nepal came across...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, while, as for, for instance, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84819277108 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75241906561 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515662650602 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0243609768 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.894736842 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126956806522 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441566119334 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396101624587 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795805982553 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464950218435 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.