It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Every single person in this world has a set of beliefs, it may be religious, spiritual or a certain set of values that the person trusts and holds dearly. It is beliefs that sustain and propel people forward towards their dream.
Having a belief is a good thing to a certain degree as it can provide mental and spiritual support. Due to the fact that humans have always been so reliant on beliefs that we often overlook their importance. However, if one were to analyze and justify each of his/her actions, one would realize that each and every thought and action we perform is based on this very set of beliefs engraved within us. That being said, being faithful in belief systems is not always beneficial. If the belief goes too extreme and eventually impacts the person’s life and relationships negatively, then one should question whether this belief is worth adhereing to.
As discussed in the previous paragraph, belief systems are what people hold faithfully to, abandoning them is equitable to a total rejection of one’s belonging and values. Thus, abandoning beliefs can do considerable harm to one mentally and even physically. However, it is an overstretch to claim that it is more harmful to compromise one’s own belief than to adhere to them. Compromising your beliefs does not equate with abjuring your belief. Instead, one may view compromising as a way for ones belief to resprout and grow into a better form. No one in this world has a complete identical set of beliefs, and when beliefs don’t coincide, people argue. Even the closest friends, kin have disputes once in a while. This is why people ought to learn how to compromise sometimes and find common ground with the beliefs of the opposing party.
Although beliefs are what each and every one of us trust and rely on, it cannot be certain that what we believe in is always correct. This can be exemplified by the religious cults that have been pervasive since the very foundation of human history. Although these beliefs bring the people within the cult closer forming a seemingly friendly but cliquish society, if the belief systems held by the cult are fundamentally wrong, it may ultimately lead to bad consequences, as evident by the recent bombing cases of ISIS. Thus, if a cult member realizes the mistakes in his belief, he ought to compromise them instead of adhereing to them, that way he can adopt a new set of beliefs that may be more morally justified.
In conclusion, we should all adhere to our set of beliefs to a certain degree. However, if the beliefs are impacting us negatively, or that they are in conflict with many of your closest friends and kin, it may be wise to reflect whether to compromise or continue to adhere to the belief.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 279, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...lly and even physically. However, it is an overstretch to claim that it is more harmful to com...
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Line 4, column 504, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... one may view compromising as a way for ones belief to resprout and grow into a bett...
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Line 4, column 773, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'compromise'.
Suggestion: sometimes compromise
...his is why people ought to learn how to compromise sometimes and find common ground with the beliefs...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...sing party. Although beliefs are what each and every one of us trust and rely on, it cannot be c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2281.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81223628692 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65225116738 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497890295359 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9771934706 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.619047619 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09523809524 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419750418464 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134592606356 0.0831039109588 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153511774071 0.0758088955206 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221582783896 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158361219836 0.0667264976115 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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