This issue raises the controversial issue whether people have to adhere to their beliefs because it is harmful to compromise them. Indisputably, that we build up our beliefs and values depends on different life situations and a lot f considerations. Hence, from my point of view, I do not agree that it is dangerous to compromise one's beliefs and we do not have to stick to them. However, to substantiate my case this essay will elaborate my reasons and examples clearly.
To begin with, it is irrefutable that the building block for any person is myriad of things such as, values, beliefs, level of education, knowledge, information and personal traits. On one hand, shaping these components are not easy and depends on different life situations and accumulated experiences. In other words, there is no definite right beliefs or wrong ones, all person behaviors and actions depends on the life situations.
Further, the second vital point that should be taken into account that the effects of religions on the people beliefs because some of them comes with restricted shape and there is no way to change it. One striking example is the middle east's people beliefs that girls should not work at night such as nurses but this beliefs is totally wrong and they do not have to adhere to it.
Last but not least, the contrary point of view would reveal some aspects such as adhering to specific beliefs will prevent the debatable issue and will preclude any future problems because there are definite beliefs that all people have to follow the same set of beliefs. This is true in different situation and aspects if there is a clear subject cannot bear different beliefs. Consequently, it is hard to hold their opinion in to account.
In conclusion, due to aforementioned reasons and examples people have to be flexible in their beliefs due to ongoing changes on the life situations and adhering to the same beliefs will lead to further problems and conflicts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...gree that it is dangerous to compromise ones beliefs and we do not have to stick to ...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ld not work at night such as nurses but this beliefs is totally wrong and they do no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, second, so, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93072289157 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68329205438 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515060240964 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1634343764 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.923076923 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121782376204 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453834153967 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352061351202 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712283724522 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319918182532 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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