Belief on a particular topic, fact, or thing might vary from person to person due to different points of view, or even due to the amount of knowledge one has on that particular topic or fact. One even might have conflicting beliefs about a particular thing and do not know which one is right or whether both are right or wrong. Thus first of all one must do research and figure out whether her own belief is right or not. If one's belief is not wrong then obviously it is more harmful to compromise the belief instead of adhering to it.
When someone knows that her perspective on a fact is actually correct, and even after knowing it if she ends up compromising her view on the fact for whatever reason she has to do such thing for, will eventually lead to frustration within her. This in turn will hamper the mental serenity of the person, hence will also affect her surrounding be it at work or at home.
Moreover, not sticking to one's belief also restricts self-development. It is highly crucial to stick to one's self-belief and work according to the belief in order to enhance own development, be it mental or in terms of institutional certificates or even success at sports or in any other field. For example, when a batsman knows that he does batting well from his left hand side then this belief or fact can actually bring tremendous success to him instead of following the norm of batting.
However, there are a number of people who thinks that giving up one's own views is better than sticking to them sometimes. And yes sometimes it is actually good to give up the self-views as those views might me wrong, in fact, there might be better views than what one has. Thus it is wise to accept correct or better views instead of sticking to the wrong or poor ones.
In conclusion, it can be said that one must never restrict herself to only embracing her beliefs or giving up her beliefs, rather one must be open to compromising or adhering her beliefs based on requirements or based on what is best for a particular scenario.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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...whether her own belief is right or not. If ones belief is not wrong then obviously...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ight be better views than what one has. Thus it is wise to accept correct or better ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53658536585 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58525790483 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49593495935 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.929503566 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.769230769 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3846153846 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 5.21951772744 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146962524709 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637893852959 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496498844159 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823194515331 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361917014473 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 12.1743820225 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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