It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
“HERO”! Whom do we call a hero? Can a HERO be articulated in a phrase or a sentence? I say the as the answer is ‘no’. The reason being, a hero is someone who has shown great wisdom through his actions. It is not necessary that a hero has to prove himself. The society has to find the hero. Hero’s are there everywhere you can find them provided you are aware of what’s going on in and around you.
There are many people serving the society without our notice. People serve the society through various means. Society generally fails to recognize a hero the reason being, people are busy with the glam side of the society and often fail to recognize the true hero. We consider film hero’s as real hero. There are die heart fans for a reel hero but we seldom find fans for a real hero. Even the media which plays an important role in the society fails to recognize and publicize his work.
For example, a team of seven doctors have come together and were successful in brain transplantation in the recent times at a Yashoda hospital’s Hyderabad. Which is a commendable work but done by the troop, where not many know about this fact, where as a hero releases a movie it is very well publicized by the media. This clearly shows that we lack in interest, we lack in identifying, we lack in taking up a responsibility. We are more concerned on what fetches us more money, more fame. Inability of a society is clear.
Building up, we are never bothered to support a hero in spite of his amorous service to the society. People at old age homes are been taken care by an ordinary person who has got so much zeal to help the society. A person who has saved many lives of other during floods in city is always not to be known. A person takes no wage to help the poor out there is never known. A person who gives all his retirement benefits to a charitable trust is not known. We never want to know such things. We have failed to appreciate them.
To sum up, in this busy world where everybody thinks that they have done a lot for the society being reel hero’s or sports persons, we forget what real hero’s are like. We forget what their contributions are. The glam side of the society blinds the vision of a common man.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...help the poor out there is never known. A person who gives all his retirement ben...
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Suggestion:
...iety blinds the vision of a common man.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'in spite of', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224032586558 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.187372708758 0.157235817809 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0672097759674 0.0880659088768 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0386965376782 0.0497285424764 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0590631364562 0.0444667217837 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.091649694501 0.12292977631 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0448065173116 0.0406280797675 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62422803834 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285132382892 0.030933414821 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0061099796334 0.0016655270985 367% => OK
Determiners: 0.109979633401 0.0997080785238 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0040733197556 0.0249443105267 16% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0244399185336 0.0148568991511 165% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2279.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 415.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49156626506 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.26265060241 0.366273622748 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171084337349 0.280924506359 61% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.113253012048 0.200843997647 56% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0795180722892 0.132149295362 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62422803834 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 219.290929204 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50843373494 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 56.6849218643 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6194690265 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.3103448276 23.380412469 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8924477319 59.4972553346 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5862068966 141.124799967 56% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3103448276 23.380412469 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.275862068966 0.674092028746 41% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 31.4187785625 51.4728631049 61% => OK
Elegance: 1.26428571429 1.64882698954 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224444184785 0.391690518653 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103440955767 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0705910503203 0.077325440228 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.443409253621 0.547984918172 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122055033128 0.149214159877 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804509570914 0.161403998019 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489880775108 0.0892212321368 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274892638865 0.385218514788 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0956708209985 0.0692045440612 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14802115607 0.275328986314 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340014564161 0.0653680567796 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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