If people say there are no living heroes as the society regards, it sounds a bit of pessimistic which makes us worried about our future. In the history, the human civilization sometimes evolved by significant events which led by heroes, thus the human society has been developing for thousands of years. However, with this view of heroes, we may find we could not go on the live with them. In my opinion, we should not be so anxious in that we should know what heros could bring to us as well as what their really means in differnet times.
To begin with, we should admitt there were various kinds of heroes in the history in every field. Abraham Lincoln freed the salves and made the real union of the US. The efforts and value of euqality of his will inspire not only the Amrcians but also the whole human beings to chase for a better future together no matter where are they from as well as which socioeconomic levels they are in. Albert Enistein, propeled the development of Physics as well as the whole human technology by the new views of time and space which led us to discover our planet and outer space. So many heroes like them contributed to the human society in different areas with the endeavors of them. The contributions are all never forgotten by the whole people of the world. They are rememebered by their achevements and we all venerate them as we all knew their stories.
In this point, it seems hopeless that we can not find a living man or woman, whose contribution could compete with the Lincolns and Einsteins. While in my opionion, the heroes are always by our side, as it is true evey age need heroes. So Let's find them now.
First of all, we should know why we seemly can not find these heroes. There is an significant development which attributes the heroes' absence, that is the new media especially after the invetion of the Internet and mobile Internet. Due to the power of the IT technolofy, we can find what we like or what we need, while if you are not a researcher in Physics, you may not know there was a historical invetions with new discoveries had shocked the Physics academic field, which reprents two molecues far from each other at the distance of 1500km in China, they can move in the exactly same path in the two labs.Maybe the people would not take care of this kind of news ,instead the TV shows are some of their taste, while this discovery would realize the scene of the Star Trek that transmitt people from a planet to another one in the future. As the Internet provide us what we would like to know, people are deeply separated by the differentiations by the severs of the Internet. So it there are heroes , some of us could not notice them.
Sceondly, we should make clear a heroes essence is not how significant achevements they made, while it is their spririts which encourage us to move on. As my concern, the policemen and policewomen are heroes, because the protect us from being harmed by criminals.Also, the people who donor blood when there is a patient need it are heroes, their spirits would and will not mortal.
In all, we should make clear of our mind to find the heroes, they are still alilve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, so, still, thus, well, while, kind of, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 33.0505617978 206% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2605.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 573.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5462478185 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45782265524 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467713787086 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 814.5 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.152364832 60.3974514979 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.409090909 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0454545455 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77272727273 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102297260658 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368797398834 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453022927238 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611362677144 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518836772265 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 48.8420337079 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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