It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
A nation can be recognized by its customs and traditions, these things can be found in different areas of the country. The prompt suggests that cultural traditions are produced and conserved mostly in city areas of a country. In my opinion, I mostly disagree with this idea for two reasons, however, I do concede that some cities have generated and preserved many traditions too.
First of all, rural areas have generated and preserved more traditions than city areas because, in the past, there were only a few cities in the world and most people used to live in rural areas. Traditions and cultures can not be generated overnight - they have been with us for a very long time, that’s why they are called traditions. For instance, in Bangladesh, there is a very popular garment called ‘Nakshi Katha’ which can only be made by hand. Every village house in Bangladesh has this cloth since the Mughal rulings in the 15th century when there was no city in this country, and that’s why it is considered as an important custom and even nowadays, city dwellers buy it from country people. Thus, traditions we have with us today are mainly generated by the ancient people who used to live in countryside.
Furthermore, pastoral areas have generated more folk songs and fiction since they have more scenic views and elements of nature which attract creative people like poets, writers, and singers. Literary minds look for clues everywhere in nature to express their thoughts in writings and so, they often visit countryside. For example, the noble laureate poet Rabindranath Tagore used to explore bucolic areas of Bangladesh and India and wrote many literature there. He used to construct a small home and spend several months there before he went to another village; even his bungalow in Mymenshing, Bangladesh attracts thousands of tourists every year. Similarly, Lalon Shah, who was the most popular folk songwriter and singer of Bangladesh, used to live in Kushtia, Bangladesh; his songs reflect the true nature of his country, remind people how this country was once. They have been included in primary school books so that children can learn about their own culture from their early days.
However, some ancient cities in the world have generated and preserved many invaluable cultural traditions. Since most of the cities in the past were ruled by royal families, many of the artifacts they left behind provide us the information about life in that time. For instance, Dhaka city was a vital place when it was reigned by the British government in the 17th and 18th centuries. While their reign, they set up many buildings such as Ahsan Manjil, Lalbagh Kella, etc which are now considered as part of the culture of Bangladesh. Also, they left numerous old books, legal documents, and weapons which are now stored in museums, and people visit there to obtain knowledge of their history. Therefore, some cities which were ruled by Kings contain many historically significant things.
In conclusion, rural areas have generated and preserved more cultural traditions since most of the population of a nation used to live there, and innovative people were drawn to them although some cities are full of crucial historical specimens too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... cultures can not be generated overnight - they have been with us for a very long...
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Suggestion: much literature; a good deal of literature
...areas of Bangladesh and India and wrote many literature there. He used to construct a small hom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2716.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 537.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05772811918 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55711015478 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504655493482 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 849.6 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7684898905 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163124641688 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580002777285 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391589337303 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109357367939 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342864344129 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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