Given consideration, the cities are the best place to flourish and preserve a nation’s traditions, is highly controvertible; however in my perspective cities are not favorable places where a nation’s cultural traditions are generated and preserved. I move forward to support my position in the following of this essay.
One reason for my belief is that cities are very volatile places for adopting a new culture and tradition. Most of the cities of the world are victimized by the cultural hegemony of foreign developed country. People of the cities always want to exhibit smartness on everything. They always try to accept modernity. Most of the children who born in cities are found unknown about the cultural traditions of back home where their parents were grown.
The second reason for my belief is that cities are heterogeneous place in cultural point of view. Many people from different cultural realm are moved in cities in the name of searching opportunities. When people came from the countryside to cities they bring their culture with them inherently. So, what do you think, is there any possibility to preserve the cultural traditions of all communities? In my view, instead of preserving and generating the cultural traditions there will be intermingled of multi-culture. For instance, the recent research of the University of Virginia Tech shows that the cultural traditions of the big city were totally modified in comparison to the countryside.
Perhaps the best reason is that the cities are a very busy place. People in the cities are always in rush. They actually do not have any time to think about their cultures and traditions. We can see many people in cities who even found working on the
Thanksgiving day and the Christmas day. On the flip side, in the countryside, people give much priority to conserve and generate their cultural tradition. It is found that, in every big festival, they plan from very beginning to celebrate nicely. In the countryside, you can also test the originality of real culture without adulteration of a foreign culture.
For all these reasons, I believe that cities are not the best place for cultural traditions of a nation's. It is basically the countrysides where a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, second, so, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16310160428 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98414049808 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478609625668 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5068710454 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7727272727 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95454545455 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245726495342 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768068592588 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514087687921 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142483335427 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528170241853 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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