Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances times and places

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Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

The global peace, martinet are in control because of laws and suits were made to regulate the humankind. Globally there is a plethora of religion, caste, culture, tribes, and variety of people who follows their own circumscribes to maintain regularity of discipline.latter on laws of countries were designed to bound people in some order and I think it is predominant to keep people in a certain discipline as well as in proper conduct. Along with the discipline justice to the people should be unbiased and flawless as maximum as possible. Thus, I strongly believe that laws should be adaptable depending on context and flexible enough to consider a myriad of people who are bounded in their own set of riles and logistics for three reasons.
Firstly, In different countries laws were made at the time of their independence with consideration of independence years' context to tackle their current problem as countries were inchoate. But as they are developing towards the future the law suits dose not changed in some countries with the passage of time to withstand variety of people.
for instance, at the time of independence of India various laws were made by colonials which were conducive to them but not to independent Indians. As India is such a diverse and vivid country with millions of variety of people having their own circumscribes. Cast system, religion made a lot of conflicts while applying the laws. They were not in equal justice of everyone with repsect to one parameter of 'Human'. This system is detrimental to the country especially like India where a diversity of different group is humongous.
Secondly, laws should be flexible enough to make justice with people considering touchstones of time and place irrespective of religion and cast. In India there are cast category in admission system irrespective of talent which unfair with a lot of students who are brave but not in any certain type of cast.making this jaundice is huge loss of talented ones driving country to uncertain direction. Thus at least education system must be fair and unbiased which can be conducive to inched country's talent. However, there can be reservation for people who cannot afford the education or who are disabled or in conflict areas.
Moreover, these laws can be adaptive with respect off place that is geographical context. laws in the area on volcanic eruption places must be different than laws in inverterate locality because peopleare unable to get habitual place to survive as they are always under a peer pressure. foe example housing insurance cover in conflict area, must be due by government whereas, in habitual area the percentage of covering might be modicum.
However, some might argue that change in laws with differnet respect will burden the law sytem of country and may derive various consequences regarding plethora of issue. Moreover, frequent change of laws can be conundrum or perplexing to the people of country but strong government can modulate the system with usage of advance technology and haruspicating planning and procedure.
In toatlity, laws are parameters of martinet and decorum which mould the life in positive perspectives. laws shoul not be biased based on just racism, cast or religeion but adptable, modular and flexbile for people on the bais of only as a Human being.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, while, at least, for instance, i think, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 95.0 58.6224719101 162% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2778.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 546.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08791208791 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82117398654 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479853479853 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 894.6 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5652608881 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.272727273 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95454545455 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245824155969 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804266633587 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795382035675 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122757600456 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459523925709 0.0667264976115 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 100.480337079 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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