Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances times and places

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Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

The global peace, martinet are in control because of laws and suits were made to regulate the humankind. Globally there is a plethora of religion, caste, culture, tribes, and variety of people who follows their own circumscribes to maintain regularity of discipline.latter on laws of countries were designed to bound people in some order and I think it is predominant to keep people in a certain discipline as well as in proper conduct. Along with the discipline justice to the people should be unbiased and flawless as maximum as possible. Thus, I strongly believe that laws should be adaptable depending on context and flexible enough to consider a myriad of people who are bounded in their own set of riles and logistics for three reasons.
Firstly, In different countries laws were made at the time of their independence with consideration of independence years' context to tackle their current problem as countries were inchoate. But as they are developing towards the future the lawsuits dose not changed in some countries over time to withstand a variety of people.
for instance, at the time of independence of India, various laws were made by colonials that were conducive to them but not to independent Indians. India is such a diverse and vivid country with millions of variety of people having their own circumscribes. Cast system, religion made a lot of conflicts while applying the laws. They were not in equal justice of everyone concerning one parameter of 'Human'. This system is detrimental to the country especially like India where the diversity of the different groups is humongous.
Secondly, laws should be flexible enough to make justice with people considering touchstones of time and place irrespective of religion and cast. In India, there are cast categories in the admission system irrespective of talent which unfair with a lot of students who are brave but not in any certain type of cast.making this jaundice is a huge loss of talented ones driving the country to the uncertain direction. Thus at least the education system must be fair and unbiased which can be conducive to inched the country's talent. However, there can be a reservation for people who cannot afford the education or who are disabled or in conflict areas.
Moreover, these laws can be adaptive concerning the place that is geographical context. laws in the area on volcanic eruption places must be different than laws in the inveterate locality because people are unable to get a habitual place to survive as they are always under peer pressure. foe example housing insurance cover in the conflict area must be due by the government whereas, in the habitual area the percentage of covering might be modicum.
However, some might argue that change in-laws with different respect will burden the law system of the country and may derive various consequences regarding a plethora of issues. Moreover, frequent changes of laws can be conundrum or perplexing to the people of the country but the strong government can modulate the system with the usage of advanced technology and prescience planning and procedure.
In totality, laws are parameters of martinet and decorum which mold life in positive perspectives. laws should not be biased based on just racism, caste, or religion but adaptable, modular, and flexible for people based on only as a Human being.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, while, at least, for instance, i think, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 91.0 58.6224719101 155% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2808.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 553.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07775768535 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82755180277 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464737793852 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 905.4 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9588118016 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.636363636 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1363636364 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95454545455 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255118804461 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831971792603 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824234155123 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129750865592 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486478377653 0.0667264976115 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 100.480337079 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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