Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances times and places

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Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

A strong judicial system is imperative for maintenance of law and order in any country. This possible only when people respect and deligently follow laws that have been enacted. Thus, I disagree with the statement that laws should be flexible depending upon the various circumstances, times and places. I hold this opinion for two main reasons which I will explore in the essay.

To begin with, if the laws are usually created taking into consideration the circumstances, time and places. There are different laws for different circumstances. For example, if a person intentionally killed another person, then the crime is considered as a murder by law and the punishment for it is severe. However, if he is driving his car under the influence of alcohol and accidently causes the death of a pedestrian, then it is considered culpable homicide and the punishment for it is less severe. Thus there are already separate laws enacted taking into account the occasions, times, places. Thus there is no point in keeping them flexible and liable to be mended as per circumstances.

Secondly, keeping the laws flexible can cause them to be misused greatly. The defaulters of the law may create false evidence to prove the reasons they have broken the law and get away easily after breaking the rules. For instance, if the laws for punishment against over-speeding are kept malleable depending on the reasons the person was going faster than the limit, many people will lie about the same and evade the ticket and the punishment. They may even fabricate some false evidence for proving it. Thus the effective law and order will be comppromised.

However there are some cases when laws need to be mended. For example, in India youngsters below eighteen years of age were not allowed to be punished inspite of comitting henious crimes like rape. However after a rape case where one of the convicts was seventeen years of age, the law was mended and the age was made sixteen.

Thus, in conclusion, in most circumstances laws should not be kept flexible as it can cause misuse of laws and mostly laws have already been made taking into circumstances, places and times. However, some cases might necessitate revision of the laws altogether.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99465240642 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73955502129 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51871657754 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2783928309 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307020249067 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959763126337 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934072063075 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178787006616 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775364648427 0.0667264976115 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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