Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
To begin, if the laws are changed according to the circumstances, then people start modifying the law according to their demands.For example, consider a gang rape of a girl by a group of young boys of age less than 18 (not even adults). So, we study this case, boys should be punished in the same way as other adults in the case scenario, there should be no exemption in such scenarios. If there is any dispensation made for these considering that they are not so mature then we are laying a bad notion that young boys are too immature to understand and respect girls. This is not right. We should raise our children from the day they are born to help and respect women in the society. If we dwindle the punishment of these male children then other boys of the same age might repeat the same mistake again since they know that the punishment is somehow reduced to them. Hence, if the laws are changed according to the circumstances like age here, laws will not remain rigid and this will create many such problems.
Further, if the laws are simply modified according to the circumstances they can no more be called law. Since the law is something which maintains harmony in the society. People should follow rules and regulations as stated in laws then only there will be pleasant atmosphere and inturn for the well-being of the society.To illustrate, consider a situation where a person is in a hurry to board his flight and he forgets to tighten the seat belt in the car.He has to reach his destination within few minutes but this doesn't mean that there should be any exemption given to this guy.He is not merely breaking the law, he is also jeopardizing his own life.So, here if we give an exemption to him thinking that he is in a hurry and has to catch his flight then everyone starts doing the same mistake.Instead, if we impose fine on that person for breaking the law then others will be cautious not to do the same mistake.Thus, laws shouldn't be changed according to the time and circumstances.
Nevertheless, some people might argue that laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, time and places. It's true that there are certain places where laws imposed will be very cruel. For example, consider a kid who lost his parents in an automobile accident and has no money to study further. He has a granny whom he needs to take guardianship of. He is himself very young and on top of that he needs to take guardianship of his granny now. It's so difficult for him to continue his studies because of the financial conditions. He should be punished under the jurisprudence. Here, he is earning money for some good will but this doesn't mean the path he chose wasn't bad, definitely, the path he took to earn the money is illegal and is against the law. He should be penalized under the law. Hence, careful scrutiny is required to look at these situations. The government should encourage studies of these students through scholarships. Thus, the law shouldn't be modified based on circumstances, instead we need to find why such circumstances occur and then try removing the root cause of such situations. Thus, laws shouldn't be changed based on any circumstances, times, and places
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, in the same way, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2734.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 581.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70567986231 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73187752426 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442340791738 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 833.4 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 150.603779049 60.3974514979 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2083333333 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.79166666667 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352826393505 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106782866211 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124867728311 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249913043574 0.150359130593 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051437028734 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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