Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Laws govern the society we live in. Without laws, the society will turn into a turmoil. There's law specific consequence for a specific illegal activity. But is it justifiable to give two different persons the same punishment for their misdeeds even though they come from different backgrounds? The prompt says that it's not, circumstances, times, and places should be taken into account before giving a sentence. I agree to this statement and would argue that laws should be flexible for each individual.
To begin with, no one is born a criminal. Circumstances turn an innocent baby to an adult miscreant. So, why is it that people should be judge only on the basis of the crime and not on the circumstances that led to such a crime? It's not fair to not consider them both. For example, let's take Tom and Hank into account, both are guilty of stealing money. Tom grew up in a healthy suburban home with opportunities of good education, while Hank grew up in a slum with little access to education. Tom stole money so that he could buy luxury items, while Hank stole it to feed his baby since he couldn't get a job due to his lack of skills. Is it fair to give both of them the same punishment even though Tom did it on his own accord while Hank was a victim of his situation? It's not. Both the crime and the circumstances needs to be considered. A fair judgement would only be possible if both are considered.
Furthermore, what about age and the relationship between age and crime? A child is more prone to mistakes due to their lack of inexperience and gullibility than an adult. It is absurd to punish an adult and a child with the same law. For example: July, an adult and Mary, a teenager both are guilty of stealing a car. The punishment of stealing a car is 5 years. Isn't it possible that Mary was going through a rebellious phase just like any other teenager? Maybe, a personal tragedy led a well-behaved Mary to do such an heinous crime. Also, would be okay to sentence Mary 5 years in jail without a chance rehabilitation? Mary should be given the help she needs not sent to jail. A proper rehabilitation with therapy might actually help Mary become a paragon citizen.
But, one may argue that a crime is a crime, a criminal is a criminal. There's no redemption for it. If that's the case, then why are there jails? Jails are there to punish the criminals, but also to rehabilitate them. Criminals are given moral lessons, taught basic skills, and even eligible for an education. Even the jails are designed to harbor criminals based on the decree of their crimes. Then why shouldn't the crimes be punished based on what caused it?
In conclusion, Laws should consider circumstances, times and places and choose the best consequence for the guilty so that they don't do the same crimes again. A fair trial is based not only on the basis of the crime but also on why it was committed in the first place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2394.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 526.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55133079848 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64620754598 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484790874525 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 756.9 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.2370786517 173% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1252608619 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.4 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.0285714286 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82857142857 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 22.0 5.13820224719 428% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18056035391 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410820147691 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060076726134 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104103075088 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651739907745 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 14.1392134831 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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