Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Strict laws are necessary in a society to function properly and in a smooth manner and if they are not followed than there would be disorder in the nation and the progress of the nation is hamper. Although, there should be a possibility to change the laws according to the different circumstances, times and place and I do agree with the aforementioned statement. In any society progress would only happen when the citizens are given freedom to do what they like, but with a condition that they should follow the laws which are made. If the laws are broken then there should be some kind of punishment. For instance, any citizen is allowed to drive a vehicle above the age of 18 years, but if they do not follow the laws like the safe driving, driving after they have consume alcohol, over speeding then the law has the power to fine that citizen and they could also be placed behind the bars. However, the there are some cases where the laws need to be change according to different circumstances, so that the justice is served faster. We have seen this many a times in the course of history. For instance, even in country like India where death penalty is rarely given, but in the case of Nirbaya the girl who was raped in a bus in DelhiThe criminal included a minor also, but the laws were change the minor was also given the death sentence. This is done to set up an example in the country that if ill practice is followed then the laws would be changed to punish the individual. In case of emergencies where rapid decision is necessary, the court should have the right to change the laws which would help the country to fight that emergency. Instead of going by the traditional method of trailing, the nation should follow the an express way providing the solution of the problem. For instance, in the time of covid, rapid decision where made like a nation wide lockdown as it was the only way to curb the virus. If the laws had not been change than the virus would have spread a lot. In conclusion, there should be a flexibility in the laws of a country such that they can be change according to various circumstance, times and places, but this should not be a excuse for poor judgement or a wrong individual should not be punish. The laws should not be change so that some individual or an organization makes a profit from it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a smooth manner" with adverb for "smooth"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...y in a society to function properly and in a smooth manner and if they are not followed than there...
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Line 1, column 535, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... should follow the laws which are made. If the laws are broken then there should b...
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Line 1, column 769, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'consumed'.
Suggestion: consumed
...e safe driving, driving after they have consume alcohol, over speeding then the law has...
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Line 1, column 1061, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...s served faster. We have seen this many a times in the course of history. For instance,...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
...d of trailing, the nation should follow the an express way providing the solution of t...
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Line 1, column 1856, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...covid, rapid decision where made like a nation wide lockdown as it was the only way to curb...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... it was the only way to curb the virus. If the laws had not been change than the v...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...imes and places, but this should not be a excuse for poor judgement or a wrong in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47887323944 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4620642219 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446009389671 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7360971789 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.2 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275219309555 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107603696134 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857185635927 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275219309555 0.150359130593 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 12.1743820225 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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