Claim Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed Reason It is inappropriate and perhaps even cruel to use public resources to fund the arts when people s basic needs are not b | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Claim: Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
Reason: It is inappropriate — and, perhaps, even cruel to use public resources to fund the arts when people's basic needs are not being met.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

The role of government is to serve the people. The statement asserts that government should suspend funding provided to art sector and to justify the point author gives a reason the money should be spend on basic needs of the people. Initially seeing the statment it might appear appropriate, but conisdering all the facts and doing a proper analyses, I do not agree with the statement.
Art and culture plays an important role in a society. It helps to understand the belief of the people, the way they live, their traditionals, history of the place, and much more. Art and culture plays an important role in tourism, which plays an important role in a country's GDP. There are many countries in the would whose main source of income is torism and if the govenrment stops providing funds to maintain it then surely the economy would suffer. For instance, the city of Dubai which is located in UAE, earns their major money from tourist and if the govenment on someday decides to stop funding and mainting the art and culture then the country GDP would fall.
Since the stone age art has always find a place in human-kind. It is the way the people interact and pass information to the next generation. Though art we can come to know the history of the place for instance, painting found in different caves. Many people earn their income by selling arts. If the government stops supporting them then their lively hood would go and they would become unemployed. So, the govenment cannot stop providing funding to the art sector as many people lives depend on it. It might also happen that if the governement starts giving free food to the people, they might lose the motivation to work and would just sit ideal. This would not do any progress for the nation.
Not denyig the fact, that the govenment should always see the benefit of the citizen and see to it that their needs are getting fullied. The govenment should have different schemes which helps the people to be independednt and sufficient to provided for themselfes and their family. The government should look at a longer picture and do a proper analyses before shuting down funding to a sector.
In conclusion, art and culture are the ways in which one country earns its name in the world. For instance, 21st June is celebrated as the 'Yoga Day' in India, but now this day is not only celebrated within India but throughout different nations. This year it was celebrated in White House when the Prime Minister of India visited the Unitied States of America. So, art helps to promote a country and helps to increase relationship which other countries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...thor gives a reason the money should be spend on basic needs of the people. Initially...
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Line 2, column 669, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ulture then the country GDP would fall. Since the stone age art has always find a pla...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
...l. Since the stone age art has always find a place in human-kind. It is the way th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74065934066 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47270426718 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492307692308 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3031377624 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7826086957 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7826086957 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52173913043 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245201212802 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067506280063 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505789884498 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135297742624 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387033889577 0.0667264976115 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments