Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Laws are present everywhere for the welfare and protection of the people. However, in some cases, laws are too stringent, not taking into account the some extra ordinary circumstances and places. Laws should be made flexible enough to make sense in a practical environment.
Consider, the recent increase in fines across India for traffic violations. Though, this move has received accolades from many prominent people, it has faced backlashes from the common man. increasing fines for violating important rules like not wearing helmet while riding two wheelers, consuming alcohol and driving or not wearing seatbelt while driving a car is justifiable. However, some fines are very steep and unjustified for some petty violations like no-parking and other small violations. Sometimes, motorists or cars standing behind huge vehicles like buses or trucks, will not be able to sight the signal. hence, they may jump the signal unknowingly and the cops catch hold of them for breaking the rules. In such cases, the cops must realize the situation and understand the problems of the common man. Therefore, there must be some flexibility in enforcing laws in different circumstances.
Additionally, let us consider the example of schools not allowing kids to enter the school even though the kids arrive only a few minutes late. it is understandable that motive behind these rules is to enforce discipline in kids. but, recent traffic congestions in the city during morning peak hours makes it very difficult for parents to drop off their kids at the school at the exact time. hence, some concessions must be given to kids and allow them to enter the schools or college even if they are a few minutes late. some schools even go to the extreme implementation of these rules and not allow kids to write the exam if they are even a minute late. this can some adverse effects on the kids education if he/she is not allowed to appear for some important examinations. it is also possible that the kid might have been late due to some unforeseen circumstances, like a flat tyre or there might have been an accident on the road which caused traffic congestion. hence, the institutions must take into account of these circumstances and allow students some margin of error before enforcing strict rules upon them.
However, in some cases, laws should not be made flexible at all. In situations where crimes are committed intentionally, like murder or driving under the influence of alcohol, the accused must not be given bail under any circumstances. hence, the government must ensure that they are implementing the rules very strictly in these situations.
To summarize, we can conclude that laws should be made flexible enough to accommodate various circumstances, times and places. The lawmakers should take into account the problems faced by the common man in a practical environment and realize that rules cannot always be withheld in every situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2483.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13016528926 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77379168765 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502066115702 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 783.9 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7407476372 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.458333333 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95833333333 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245837119871 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802752856345 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121539358856 0.0758088955206 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21113124523 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159835240517 0.0667264976115 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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