Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them

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Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.

Leader is the one who leads his or her followers at times of difficulties. It is the demand of situation which presents a platform for a leader to show his or her abilities. Actually, a person who fits to demands of public is called a leader.
To begin with, there are lot of developing countries who choose wise and steadfast leaders to execute a company. Every individual is unique and tries to make a difference by upgrading his skills and knowledge. Many CEO’s are held with huge responsibilities to manage work from the employees and to assert tasks. Companies are changing their highly posted officers and CEO’s constantly. Even callow employees are given great positions to maintain the economy of the company. Employees who are diligent and docile to their work are celebrated in the company with higher salary and position.
Secondly, individual who are stated as leader’s are given by the people who want them to be. Breaking the orthodox beliefs and pursuing their thoughts to influence people. All leaders have been punctilious and diligent towards their duties which are responsible to become a leader. Leaders are made by the people. During election, voting of citizen determines which candidate is appropriate to rule the country. There are few leaders who have been re-elected for the second time to run the government. For example, Mr. Barack Obama, Under the auspices of this smart personality, US marines checked many terrorist targets, which also included assassination of cruelest of the world, Osama Bin Laden.
However, people against the given notion may argue that these personalities were inborn leaders, their leadership has to do having nothing with any demands. Yes, they were inborn leaders. Nevertheless, world came to know about abilities of these inborn geniuses only because of their deeds, which they did to free the world from evils existed at their times.
Conclusively, we can say that demands are usual progenitors of leaders. Finally, I will like to conclude this discussion with few words of Swami Vivekananda, " World will have leaders, as long as there are problems to be solved by them."

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to wise'
Suggestion: to wise
... lot of developing countries who choose wise and steadfast leaders to execute a comp...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: APOSTROPHE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'leaders'.
Suggestion: leaders
... Secondly, individual who are stated as leader’s are given by the people who want them t...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...sual progenitors of leaders. Finally, I will like to conclude this discussion with f...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e problems to be solved by them.'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14245014245 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7744695034 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9454348068 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9523809524 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16496282105 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538795655536 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647661466234 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927623653111 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765053305219 0.0667264976115 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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