Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Leader is action not a position. So, basically, leaders are the one htet leads, works for the betterment and guodes the people to a perdetermined destination inspite of difficulty. The prompt suggests that the leaders are created by the need and demand placed on the people. I mostly agree with the prompt for the following reasons.
Firstly, the leader are born when an individual is capable to solve the existing problem and improve the life of people and guide them to a better path. For an instance, In India, Mahatma Gandhi lead the lead the peaceful revolution to absolve the native Indian from the then tyrranical rule of the East Indian company. He became leader because his prudence and tenacious nature,which was not diluted by either by the payola or the brutality by the fasists that put his and the family members at risk. Evan then he did not give up and gave continuity to the revolution. So, today he is marked as the hero in India. On contrery had he given up and kneel down to the britishers at that time he would not have been able to abolish the brithsh and mediocer indian would have still suffered.
Secondly, the leader is able to find solution to the existing problem: that the leader must be judicious and over all the greed. For an instance, the person who can read and understand the existing problem and find out the best possible way tackle the problem or the outcome not for the specific number of people but for all, are accailamed as te heroes and leader of the people. On the other hand if noone fron the group can come up with th ebetter plan to overcome the problem and cannot help people overcome the pernicious situation they are in then the group lacks the hero or a leader.
Laslty, some might argure, that leaders are no born, but it is a trait that is innate to the individual. For an instance, in the past the leaders were the rulers. The nextgeneraton of the fierce king would be the leader of the stuance of the king rather than the outside of the blood leaniage person who is more qualifed than that the prince.
In conclusion, despite all the argument, the only fact the remains is that an individual must be able to work for the betterment and overcome all the hardship for the group of people loyal to him ro her. Then, only one can be called leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Gandhi) must be used with a third-person verb: 'leads'.
Suggestion: leads
...r an instance, In India, Mahatma Gandhi lead the lead the peaceful revolution to abs...
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Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'lead the'.
Suggestion: lead the
...r an instance, In India, Mahatma Gandhi lead the lead the peaceful revolution to absolve the nati...
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Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ecause his prudence and tenacious nature,which was not diluted by either by the payola...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52757793765 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4011610922 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494004796163 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4779436995 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.888888889 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110905870071 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413460678076 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337334322683 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681831994114 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385729090379 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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