Teacher's salary should be based on their student's academic performance.
teachers is given the highest position in most of the societies. they groom, train, guide and feed students with essential knowledge that will help elevate the student’s ability in future. students that are groomed by better teacher during the junior years becomes even better later in their life. The prompt suggests that teacher should be given salaries based on the performance of students in their academics. I mostly agree with the given statement mostly for given three reasons below.
teacher, who is laborious and simplifies the difficulty of the students will have better academic result of students. teacher has to continuously work on their teaching method -improve it. And, develop a method so students can learn better as a whole. Still, the method might not be good for all the students, so instructor might have to work upon some students individually-investing their extra time and energy. And, then students can get better results in exam. In European football; there is this club Arsenal, which is a legendary club but past six seven years have not been well for them and in the process, they had to sack numerous coaches. however, since they signed Michel Arteta as their new coach the football fans hope of winning the EPL has rejuvenated. so, paying a handsome salary to the teacher, who is sincere and better at his job is unobjectionable.
Also, investing some good chunk of money for the children study is not bad at all. we should always look at the bigger picture - the return on investment that we are going to get. parents will have better performing, qualified children; who could compete with beautiful minds and get their desired objectives of career fulfilled. For an instance, the parents who spend thousands of dollars in their children study; where education is good, extra curriculum are better, rests assured for their children future. As, the number of the students to success after they have graduated is high.
however, some might argue that the students who are precocious can perform even better without the guidance of anyone. For an instance, Let be it Leonardo Da Vinci, who was ahead of his time he could think of flying machines, moving artillery and many more stuffs that were invented hundreds of years after he died, was mostly taught by himself. so, why is there need for good pay check for a teacher because at the end of the day, it is up to the students.
In conclusion, for better result we need better performing teachers and pay better, unless the child is prodigal and has better understanding of things he wants to achieve from an early age. so, it is better to pay good salary to the teachers who could improve the knowledge of the students and their academics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, then, well, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90712742981 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59773293643 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516198704104 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8691017839 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7826086957 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1304347826 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17391304348 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309929890237 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100991672112 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126539297614 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177304480292 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947354207771 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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