Art is subjective. Art has no rules or definitions that is follows. Interpretation of art may vary from person to person. I would like to mostly disagree with the prompt that for gaining the credit it deserves the art must be comprehensible to 'most' people for the following two reasons.
Something that is understandable to most people is uncommon. In today's everchanging society a film or novel that is not obscure to majority of its audience is highly unlikely. The culture and understanding of people of each region differ widely. With globalisation art is not only restricted within boundaries of a community, state or a country. There can be different perspectives to the same piece of art as well and one cannot say whether any indvidual is wrong or right. For instance, there was always ambiguity about the Monalisa's painting by Leonardo Da Vinci. Some scholars and experts have various understandings about what the art tries to convey where as most of the other common people are just able to see it as a painting. This fact cannot take away the credit from the painting that is deserves.
Merit of art will be given on the basis of the idea and quality of art. Even if incomprehensible to some or many people, it does not neccessarily mean a film or poem does not deserve appreciation. A poem or a novel written by literary authors often use rich language with a finess in their way of producing their art. This details while appreciated by the critics and scholars will remain opaque to majority of common people.
If the art is pellucid it will definitely gain more support and approval from the people. Nontheless, appraisal from many cannot be treated as the main criteria for the art's merit. Merit of the art will be decided by the people, but one cannot guarantee that 'most' people will have the capabilities of admiring the sheer beauty of theatre or literature. In my opinion art is best judged by the esoterics who has the profundity to absorb the story artist is trying to convey.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 657, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ings about what the art tries to convey where as most of the other common people are jus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7564469914 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.829460302 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547277936963 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1313779978 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0516860292849 0.243740707755 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0154827160671 0.0831039109588 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254030983235 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0365968846581 0.150359130593 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195149996706 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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