“Leaders who are in significant positions of power should be democratically elected, not appointed.” Discuss if you agree or disagree with this statement and explain.
Regardless of if a leader was elected or appointed, leadership is only successful when the people being led are cooperative and agree to reach a consensus with the leader.
Arguably, a large percent of the world's presendents and head of states are appointed on the basis of democratic election. For example, Nigeria, a country in West Africa runs a democratic government where people elect leaders to siginificant positions such as the govenors of states and presidents. this kind of government is fortituious based on the assumption that a government elected basically by the people is always for the people. this kind of government is inclusive at least it is assumed to be and it is grassroot in nature such that the indigenious people are so relevant to the election process and an elected leader is assumed to depict a leadership wanted by the people and it is presumed that such leadership will attract more cooperation from the people. which in turn makes leadership easy and productive.
However, this is not always the case. it is worthy of note that some prospective leaders especially the politically inclined ones have a way of manipulap the people using painpoin to bribe the masses especially the benigted people.
Also. a leader appointed by a supposed person in authority is may be selected due to leadership traits which can only be easily recognised by someone in authority. this is sometimes free of sentiments that may be involved with the masses.
In conclusion, leaders are better of being elected for strategic postion but leadership should not be confined to this. A cetain level of appointment should be encouraged
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, at least, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 272.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05147058824 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94055140417 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525735294118 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3260634924 60.3974514979 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279537888122 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109115234421 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065318469073 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165367098523 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720245869968 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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