Luck plays more of a role in determining success than work ethic does.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to both support and challenge your position.
Success is the main thing, no matter how does it achieved. Once success has been achieved it is then difficult to maintain the position. Work ethics is the only key which will retain the position of success.
The competition in today's era is very much tough, those who does the hardwork success follows them. The saying 'Hardwork is the key to success to success' tells us that there is no harm in working hard, things what will receive depends on how much efforts do you put on it. The person with a working mind will always find a solution to every problem, and most importantly will not be remained dependent on the luck factor. The satisfaction which is received by completing the work and achieving the goals is nothing compared to any lottery you receive with the luck. Working person knows the value of ethics of work and hardwork, with proper amount of efforts in the right place at the right time shows you the road to success. The inventor of the game 'Pokemon Go' worked for almost 20 years for developing the game which is now on top of its success factor. The developer's assiduous abilities helped to reach the top. The time of 20 years with proper work ethics allows them to remain stable what they where suppose to be doing. This shows the patience and determination which lacks in most of the persons.
If a person always depended on the flow of the system and not depends upon the plan will not determine success. The type of how much efforts you put in smart way always helps to find the way. What you will get in return totally depends on your working ethics. Luck dont always plays an important part in determining success.
Sometimes all the efforts one puts for an outcome which are expected, depends solely on luck. The results are depended on the amount of efforts you put but the outcome depends somewhat on the luckfactor. There is nothing in your hands instead of just praying.
Success is the main key everyone wants regardless of there amount of work and the luck factor.These competitive era gives each and every person equal chance for coming up with there passion and show off there success publically. Therefore, success is the main thing, no matter how does it achieved. Once success has been achieved it is then difficult to maintain the position. Work ethics is the only key which will retain the position of success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... thing, no matter how does it achieved. Once success has been achieved it is then di...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'follow'?
Suggestion: follow
...gh, those who does the hardwork success follows them. The saying Hardwork is the key to...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to success'.
Suggestion: to success
...ws them. The saying Hardwork is the key to success to success tells us that there is no harm in worki...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...things what will receive depends on how much efforts do you put on it. The person wi...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s on how much efforts do you put on it. The person with a working mind will always ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... remained dependent on the luck factor. The satisfaction which is received by compl...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uous abilities helped to reach the top. The time of 20 years with proper work ethic...
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Line 3, column 1001, Rule ID: THEY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'were', the simple past of "to be"?
Suggestion: were
... allows them to remain stable what they where suppose to be doing. This shows the pat...
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Line 3, column 1007, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...s them to remain stable what they where suppose to be doing. This shows the patience an...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... not determine success. The type of how much efforts you put in smart way always hel...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ly depends on your working ethics. Luck dont always plays an important part in deter...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...here amount of work and the luck factor.These competitive era gives each and every pe...
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Line 9, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... thing, no matter how does it achieved. Once success has been achieved it is then di...
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Line 9, column 449, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch will retain the position of success.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.183035714286 0.157235817809 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0625 0.0880659088768 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0491071428571 0.0497285424764 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0401785714286 0.0444667217837 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102678571429 0.12292977631 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0491071428571 0.0406280797675 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34936610042 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0245535714286 0.030933414821 79% => OK
Particles: 0.00446428571429 0.0016655270985 268% => OK
Determiners: 0.125 0.0997080785238 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015625 0.0249443105267 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0334821428571 0.0148568991511 225% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2362.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 417.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66426858513 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323741007194 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230215827338 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.131894484412 0.200843997647 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0695443645084 0.132149295362 53% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34936610042 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448441247002 0.48968727796 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.3392802609 55.4138127331 87% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1304347826 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0903565543 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.695652174 141.124799967 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1304347826 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.217391304348 0.674092028746 32% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.1520175164 51.4728631049 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.47540983607 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456961050906 0.391690518653 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141826750042 0.123202303941 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0685094265061 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.56506809913 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122893414101 0.149214159877 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193595971626 0.161403998019 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065147173737 0.0892212321368 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.416129535958 0.385218514788 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103424547914 0.0692045440612 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303912239536 0.275328986314 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078879361134 0.0653680567796 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.4325221239 192% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.