The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
We are blessed with new inventions and, novel ideas emerge from different parts of the world every single that. The main aim of most of these innovations is to make human life easier but, are these luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life actually a bane in disguise? I believe that there are two sides to this coin. One side elaborates the boon and the other the drawbacks of this way of life.
Firstly, I would like to elaborate on the positive side of it. Day by day, the world is becoming a more complex place to live in due to the increasing competition in every field. This only makes life more tiresome and makes people mentally strained and hinders the quality of life. With gadgets that make day-to-day activities simpler, it relieves us of stress and helps in relaxation. For example, during the COVID 19 pandemic, if not for the mobile phones and high tech gadgets, every one would suffer greatly due to the untimely extended solitude because of extensive lockdowns. The existence of applications like Skype and Zoom made life bearable in such trying times.
Secondly, with the increasing temperatures around the globe due to Global warming, there is no choice but to succumb to air-conditioners and coolers. These are not only luxuries but need of the hour with the ice caps melting at such an alarming rate. The scenario is same when it comes to automobiles and vehicles, public transport, flights. More than just convenience, they are essential part of everyday lifestyle in today's world.
Now, I would like to elaborate on the way these leisures have taken a toll on our human health. According to many doctors, fitness experts and studies carried out, any human being should have their heart rate above 110 beats/minute for atleast 20 minutes of the day in order to be fit but, we all know the drastic scenarios of obesity, heart diseases, cancer and so on in every country. Among the many contributing factors to this, one of the most important one is how whatever we want is just one click away, be it food, shopping or medicines. This is making us lazier and our way of living laidback.
All in all, I believe, it differs from person to person if they wish to make the most of the opportunity presented to them to grow or, to perish. An individual is definitely moulded by their environment and the luxuries and conveniences, but to entirely drown into this sea of contemporary life is to fall into a never ending pit leading to an unhealthy short life. One should all stay true to their roots while spreading their branches every where to explore new possibilities to develop into a truly strong and independent individual.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...ir roots while spreading their branches every where to explore new possibilities to develop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2202.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78695652174 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67750200994 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567391304348 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6132228461 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9047619048 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114362965495 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301129258592 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392327390339 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658911100591 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509493798154 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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