A number of different medical traditions are now widely known and used: Western medicine (using drugs and surgery), herbal medicine, acupuncture (using needless at certain points of the body), homoeopathy (using minute doses of poisons), and soon.
How important is the patients’ mental attitude towards his/her treatment in determining the effectiveness of the treatment?
In today's world, there are a multitude of medical therapies available for treating various diseases, ranging from use of xenobiotics and surgery in western medicines to Homeopathy and Ayurveda. it does not end there, more upcoming methods of treatment include Aromatherapy, acupuncture and so on. All of these aim at improving the health of a patient, and a positive mental outlook promotes faster healing, as compared to lack of willingness to feel better.
Being optimistic is considered therapeutic in itself, and might increase the chances of getting fit sooner than later. For instance, in the movie starring Emilia Clarke, Me Before You: Will the protagonist faces a disastrous accident, damages his spinal cord and loses function of both his limbs. In turn, he becomes disconnected from the outside world, forlorn and unhappy with his present situation because he knows he would not be able to do any of the extreme adventurous activities he could in the past like, sky diving, deep-sea Scooba diving, paragliding etc. The story takes a turn, when the cheerful and scintillating Louisa enters his life. She brings a ray of hope for him by making elaborate travel plans for him which turns him into a sanguine person, hopeful to live and his medicines. Though, the movie does not have a happy ending, it clearly depicts the how efficacious a patient's mental attitude in determining the effectiveness of the course of treatment.
To sum up, medical treatments can only do so much, the body and it's functions and intricately and deeply related to the mind. As the saying goes, "A healthy body means healthy mind" and vice versa. even generally, a sad person may not feel at the peak of their health while someone in a good mood with a fever may seem as if they are not even suffering from an ailment. All in all, upbeat mindset aids the efficacy of medications and treatments for any patient.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, while, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94704049844 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75908364863 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654205607477 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3548969796 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.07975922557 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267400653936 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494787146109 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647342153459 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584790162062 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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