People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Everyday in a person's life he or she has to make a number of decisions, these may either be swayed by emotions or simply be logical. To simply state that a choice which is made based on what a person felt was poor one makes the other person judgemental in my view. feelings are what make us humans and every path we choose is influenced by the same. logic or emotion with respect to decision making are never absolute.they both play a crucial role in the process of choosing the best option presented to us.
To state an example to prove my statement above, a parent who love their child would be ambivalent towards sending to let them go abroad for higher studies and will be a little demurred about the idea and will worry about the well-being and safety of the child, but at this instance the guardian also understands that this opportunity for higher education will broaden the horizons for the future of their kid. if the parent<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="parent "></span> decide to choose against sending the ward abroad for further studies they clearly have not pondered enough on the topic. Any sane person when given such an opportunity would want to seize this moment and make the most of it. Even if the parents do decide for situation stated above, it is not entirely based on logic. they did put it above emotion, but that does not remove it from the equation.
Hence to say that decisions made entirely based on how one feels are biased and poor ones is a statement I<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="statement "></span> do not agree too. the world is not black and white and nor are we, so to put an opinion and a statement in a box and label it as something absolute is vague.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Everyday in a persons life he or she has to make...
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Suggestion: Feelings
...he other person judgemental in my view. feelings are what make us humans and every path ...
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Suggestion: Logic
...th we choose is influenced by the same. logic or emotion with respect to decision mak...
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Suggestion:
...hild would be ambivalent towards sending to let them go abroad for higher studies...
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...e horizons for the future of their kid. if the parent ^^
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...ove, it is not entirely based on logic. they did put it above emotion, but that does...
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...s not remove it from the equation. Hence to say that decisions made entirely bas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, as to, in my view, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79207920792 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62173291653 2.79657885939 130% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.1235148776 60.3974514979 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148082724972 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529847783789 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469855238624 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100626749082 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406891208185 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.