It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
One of the most compliacted questions of all times is, "Who am I?" Hence, stating that, we our primary identification is dependent on our social groups is not true. Thought part of identity might be affected by it but not wholly. To define oneself, eclectic factors come into play, ranging from ones likes and dislikes, their personality and so on.
I believe to define onself is a taxing task. In job interviews when asked to define yourself, most candidates suffer a blow and take a while to wonder what best can explain who they are. If you ponder on the same topic, you too will feel the same way. Let us take an example of such an interview for a data analysis job. The candidate may have been part of a college sorority, and it may have played a major role in becoming who they are today but at the same time this person may think for a second in this moment is this really the place or time to define myself on the basis of such a social group. What I am trying to say is that, how we define ourselves is situational: in a reunion party of college you may identify as an alumuni and make the most of the experience.
Further, in today's society everyone has instagram bio's defining themselves in a few characters, identifying themselves as a specific gender. But is this all they are? Is a transgender person only trans and nothing else? I would like take the example of Trinetra, she is an influential member of today's society from Kasturba medical college. She stands for the rights of the LGBTQ+ community, but beyond all this, she also identifies as a meticullous doctor. Her social beliefs are not the only ones that define her.
An individual is not just made of one component, many things come together to make a beautiful person.
Social interactions do affect our personalities and how we tend to identify ourselves in many places. If you are part of a Pride parade, you identify as a supporter of the LGBTQ+ community, because doing otherwise is impertinent. Many times people may just identify themselves as part of a social group to fit in. I don't feel this is entirely horrendous, but at the same time, why not just be true to yourself.
Many people suffer from social anxiety, and are diffident. They are not part of large interactions and gatherings and prefer to stay indifferent. A lot of these people would mostly be insecure about the fact that they are anti-social and would never identify as an introvert, which should be the "social definition" of their self. I mean why would anyone want to wear their insecurities on their sleeve and flaunt it, right?
How a person expresses themself should be a personal choice and not be affected by judgement or trends or anything for that matter. This helps one realize their true potential when any difficult situaution is thrown at them. "Stay original", even though the banality of this statement may throw you off, but it is true and should be one's mantra of life to become a strong independent being.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, really, second, so, while, i mean, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2490.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 530.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69811320755 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73257839632 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511320754717 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 798.3 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2667799111 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6296296296 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18311751344 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469669948959 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451340300341 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810597343909 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507231833851 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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