Male and female perform different tasks due to inherent physical differences
For many centuries, there has been a contention regarding the type of tasks that can be done by a man or a women. In the recent years, with the advancement of though and owing to egalitarianism, there has a been a shift to impartial distribution of tasks between the enlisted genders. However, the picture was not as uniform as it seems now. For many years, society has believed that women are suited for household activities and handling home logistics, while the men are meant to sweat in a working space with demanding tasks. The prompt reasons this discrepancy with the premise that entrenched or biological physical differences between men and women do not allow them to take up same tasks. I moderately disagree with the prompt for three reasons.
From the beginning of time, as history points out, there have been a conspicuous biased division of labour among the two genders. This division of labour branches from the way the family treats the kid. A female is imputed with the task of taking care of the family while the male is encouraged to earn to support the family. The way parents treat their children reflect a major deal of how they grow out to be. For instance when a female is born, parents buy dolls, knitting kits, kitchen sets (toys) as gifts, while males are treated differently; they are largessed with action figures, sports kits, and related toys for physical development. Parents encourage the girl child to learn cooking, teach her how to do chores, while the boy is encouraged to go out and play. Since they are exposed to fairly different activities since their birth, their bodies develop differently (as research has shown many times). Due to this disparate exposure, the physical differences, if believed to be existing from birth, are accentuated as an adult. Saina Nhwal, for example is a brilliant sportswomen from India. She was able to reach the acme from the support from her family. If she were exposed to such varied treatment, India would not have been able to ...Therefore, more demanding (physically) tasks are given to male than the females.
Additionally, there has been a bias against female in industry in society. Many competent females are not given the opportunities that their gender counterparts are provided with. This dichotomy is quite evident in the industry. Even in software industry, where physical development is not a key factor in selection, many companies have rejected candidates merely on the basis of gender. There have been lawsuits to companies and activists have shed light on such cases where many females were denied the right to join the company or organisation even when her repertoire or resume was better than the selected males. Recent surveys have also shown that many females, if given the opportunity can serve as better managers (or in related managerial position) than males, who have been occupying the position for decades. Therefore, it is not that females are not 'suited' for the the task, the problem is in the lack of opportunities, and ingrained prejudice in industry.
Although opportunities and upbringing plays a crucial role in the type of activities the females and males do in their youth and beyond, some discrepancy can be associated with genetics. Women are the ones responsible for continuing the society by giving birth. Since it is a very challenging and laborious task, it can often take a toll on the body. Doctors often advise women not to go to work or do anything exacting for a few months. This hiatus may impact their work and may cause her to leave her job. Therefore, sometimes genetics or inherent differences can also dictate the course your life takes and, the jobs you can do.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...e of tasks that can be done by a man or a women. In the recent years, with the advancem...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...of tasks that can be done by a man or a women. In the recent years, with the advancem...
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Line 3, column 686, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...rents encourage the girl child to learn cooking, teach her how to do chores, while the ...
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Line 3, column 1077, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sportswoman'?
Suggestion: sportswoman
...Saina Nhwal, for example is a brilliant sportswomen from India. She was able to reach the a...
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Line 3, column 1249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...t, India would not have been able to ...Therefore, more demanding physically tasks are gi...
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Line 5, column 872, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... is not that females are not suited for the the task, the problem is in the lack of opp...
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Line 5, column 872, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... is not that females are not suited for the the task, the problem is in the lack of opp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3067.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 624.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91506410256 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99799879888 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68251376041 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 309.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495192307692 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 977.4 704.065955056 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8018553936 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.233333333 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19285391231 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435628660632 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493295091858 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10885356273 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399809149674 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 100.480337079 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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