Many important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another.
"Everythiing in this world is uncertain." As we know that life is all about its uncertainities event that we have to face.
Many important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come
across the answer to another.In my opinion, I partially agree with the given topic beacause of the following three examples.
Discovery of radium makes cure of cancer possible nowdays. Do you know radium was accidentally discovered? Madam cuire accidently
discovered it in lab.
Another,Alexander Fleming discovered penicillin in 1928, when he was working on flu and prepared a culture to grow bacteria.Nowadays
penicillin is use as anitibiotics to cure phenomonia and many other bactorial diseases.
Similary,Xray was also developed accidentally.This system is use to find the inside part of all the organism for the inspection of them
and cure accordingly.
However,even many event are discover accidently,more than that discoveries are intentionaly. It is hard to take a side of any parts. Nevertheless,
Many important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 2235.4752809 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 442.535393258 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57142857143 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65303205667 2.79657885939 131% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597883597884 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 72.8875846767 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.97078651685 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445857160148 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156007229093 0.0831039109588 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.255010222133 0.0758088955206 336% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170960491485 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.289515520346 0.0667264976115 434% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.