Humans are curious by nature with a constant thirst for thinking and asking questions unanswered. It is what makes us unique from other living beings. Historically, there have been many instances where important discoveries or creations have been found accidentally and it is also the reason why schools and educational institutions encourage students to question everything learn and to have a curious mind.
Many globally renowned individuals that have earned their respect and value in this world have discovered groundbreaking important discoveries by mere accident. For example, a gifted scientist named Sir Isaac Newton, identified the theory of gravity out of mere consequence when he was sitting below a Apple tree and a apple fell on top of his head. The Ancient Greek Mathematician named Archimedes was laying in a bath tub when he unexpectedly identified the theory of volume as soon as he submerged his weight into a bath tub. Hence, there are many stories such as these where scientists identified important discoveries accidentally or when they least expected it. If you think about it, it is safe to say that every discovery made by human beings was introduced by a initial unexpected thought which may have arrived accidently or whilst attempting to answer another question. This statement could be corroborated through examples as far as prehistoric times when man first identified the concept of fire. It was identified just by the rubbing of two rocks together by a prehistoric man who was perhaps rubbing the rocks out of leisure and not expecting anything to come about it.
Hence the curious minds of humans allows us to continuously think and find solutions to questions.
However, although many important discoveries or creations are accidental, many have been discovered through years of scientific analysis and experimentation with the intention of identifying the answer to the question. For example, Sir Thomas Edison conducted a copious amount of experiments with the intention to discover if light could be produced through energy and was ultimately successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32831325301 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01834732893 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0802603194 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.076923077 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189487395634 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649385062143 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079545307087 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102599566746 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608473747973 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.