Many important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another.
Human brain is most powerful than any other living creature. The prompt states that the important discoveries are observed while doing an experiment for the some other. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement as most scientists developed or discovered something when they are finding something related to it.
To begin, a lot of discoveries made by human are intentional and the final result is what the scientists were expecting. For instance, Graham bell discovered telephone to talk with people who were far away. This is the intended he wanted to achieve and he did. The above example states that the development in purely intentional and not accidental.
Further, most of the creation of important things is done only when the creators have a proper outline. For instance, Wright brothers created airplane to fly. They wanted to have a machine which makes them fly and they created the plane. The above example states that creation is done only if the creator has a proper idea about it.
However, there were also few cases where the discoveries were made when the scientists were trying to discover some other thing. For instance, Madam Curie discovered radium when she was trying to find some other thing. Discovery of radium was considered as one of the best discovery. There were also few cases such as Newton discovered the concept of gravity when was relaxing under the tree. But this is not the case all the time.
There are cases where discoveries and creation of famous and important things were made accidentally. However, the number of such incidents are very less when compared to the discoveries which are intended to. Many of the discoveries are answers to the intended questions scientists asked for themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...erved while doing an experiment for the some other. In my opinion, I disagree with t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 290.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06896551724 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60892094359 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506896551724 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8677895694 60.3974514979 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3684210526 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132039178811 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447027492286 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635528205821 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796941075589 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698453462491 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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