Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
The author concludes that we cannot permit inoculations against cow flue to be routinely administered. The reason mentioned by the author is that since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations we need not administer it regularly. However, the author makes several assumptions that need to be addressed before going to a conclusion.
Firstly, the author assumes that cow flu will not have an other effects on the people. But, there is no clear evidence to prove it right. The flu might not not lead to death but might have several other life long issues. It might lead to a passive effect on the overall health of the person who got infected by it. We cannot ignore any issue just because it is not a life threatening one. Example, the levels of fat which leads to obesity if ignored in the early stages can lead to a heart diseases. The high consumption of alcohol will not immediately have n potential issues but needs to lunch failure and iin some cases death. Hence, as it is not lucid about the side-effects of the disease we cannot omit routine administration.
Furthermore, the author assumes that cow flu does not pose an issue for cattle farmers. But, many cattle farmer have cow products as their major income source and if their cattle is infected by a flu it will lead them to suffer a lot as they will not only loose their cattle but also will go into poverty. Many farmers take loans in order to start a cattle business and if any loss in it can land them in trouble. In country like India where cattle farming is a only source of income for many people these flu will have a tramendous effects. There are many reports of farmers commiting suicides as they were not able to pay back their loans.
Finally, the author does not clearly explain how much cost and effort it is needed to monitor these cow flu regularly. There can be a case that author might not be knowing the latest advancements in technology which may provide an easy and cost efficicent way in administrating them. There was no clear mention about the process, hence cannot come to a final solution.
Conclusion, I can concede that what author is proposing is a valid statement. But, we still does not have enough evidence and information about the reason for this conclusion taken by the author. Hence, we can only suggest if the suggested was is best or not only after getting clear explanaiton for the above stated questions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...thor assumes that cow flu will not have an other effects on the people. But, there is no...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rights'?
Suggestion: rights
... there is no clear evidence to prove it right. The flu might not not lead to death bu...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: not
...idence to prove it right. The flu might not not lead to death but might have several ot...
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Line 5, column 618, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...but needs to lunch failure and iin some cases death. Hence, as it is not lucid about ...
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Line 9, column 257, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...m to suffer a lot as they will not only loose their cattle but also will go into pove...
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Line 9, column 461, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ntry like India where cattle farming is a only source of income for many people t...
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Line 9, column 501, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this flu' or 'these flus'?
Suggestion: this flu; these flus
...a only source of income for many people these flu will have a tramendous effects. There a...
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Line 13, column 162, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ere can be a case that author might not be knowing the latest advancements in technology w...
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Line 17, column 93, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...ing is a valid statement. But, we still does not have enough evidence and informatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, still, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64155251142 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5410794799 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8658254891 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4090909091 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258981031544 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072849411047 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745308315356 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138923392909 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100712218964 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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