“Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.”
The difference between men and women has been a subject of much debate and discussion since the beginning of time. With the recent surge in activism regarding women's rights, the topic has become a sensitive issue. All around the world, women outrage over discrimination and claim their equality in all aspects relative to men.
As noble and well-meaning the thought is, it is misguided. Both genders are inherently different in their body structure and thinking process. Each gender is uniquely suited to a set of tasks that align with his/her physical and mental capabilities.
Although this difference is by no means a justifiable reason for the inequality in the treatment of the opposite sexes, it is undeniably present. Due to their high testosterone levels, men are better equipped to deal it work demanding heavy physical exertion. And the delicate nature of women's personality is well directed towards any tas requiring caretaking and supervision.
Many would argue that given a chance, women perform equally well, if not superseding men in tasks of physical labour. A fair point that does not account for the general demeanour of the fairer gender. Provided there is a necessity, women are indeed capable of heavy lifting and bearing immense pain. But that forms the exception, not the rule. Statistically speaking, girls have shown better results in academic platforms than boys while boys have had a monopoly in physical activities.
In the book Sapiens, Yuval Noah Harrari stated that the idea of women being inferior to men is a puzzling one whose origin historians have failed to pinpoint. historically, women have ousted men in hunting, household chores, strategic planning and leadership. However historically, women have been fonder of letting their hair down and leaving the battles to men too.
A man can be groomed to take care of the house, of performing those tasks that are always considered to be a women's responsibility. Coming to matters such as babysitting a baby or moulding a child's mind, leave a man unequipped since he lack the maternal instinct and tenderness of a woman. A woman similarly cannot be expected to fit seamlessly into the grotesque and gore-y world of killing and attacking each other that a man thrives in.
To say it is a man's world is unfair, men and women are able enough to be efficacious at their jobs, it is only that those jobs may not always be the same.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'works'?
Suggestion: works
...els, men are better equipped to deal it work demanding heavy physical exertion. And ...
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Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Historically
...gin historians have failed to pinpoint. historically, women have ousted men in hunting, hous...
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Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...res, strategic planning and leadership. However historically, women have been fonder of...
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Line 11, column 237, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'lacks'.
Suggestion: lacks
...s mind, leave a man unequipped since he lack the maternal instinct and tenderness of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03473945409 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79645009265 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600496277916 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5810695375 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.619047619 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198627422618 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527459781509 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372753929259 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916366902923 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285700451622 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.