Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to add

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Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

Although there are many distinct differences between physical conditions of men and those of women, causing some tasks just suited to men and some only to women, there are still many tasks that both men and women have the same ability to master. Those tasks which make they differently fitted are primarily related directly to their physical differences. even though these sharp differences, there are still a variety of work which women and men are equally capable.

First, there are truly some tasks just suited for one of the sex, some just for men, while others only for women. For example, men can't give birth to babies, which is simply because men are not designed for this hard task, i.e. men have no the well-suited organs to accomplish the job, comparing to women. On the other hand, if women want to give birth to a child, they can't do it without the help of men. these are among the tasks that require special physical conditions, resulting in the differences in abilities of men and women to accomplish the job.

Second, even though such differences and the situations that both sex not equally suited do exist, there are many other kinds of tasks that are well-suited for men and women, regardless of the preconception about the differences between men and women. There are some ideas about what are fitted to men. For example, men are more progressive and should be leaders in a company. Does the case just comfit to the traits of men? Of course not, there are still many successful women CEOs who make their companies prosper and thrive. As a result, many tasks we thought just suited for men may equally be fitted for women.

On the other hand, what about those labors thought to be just for women, such as washing dish, washing clothes, taking care for kids? Despite the fact that many women possessing some gift that they are born mothers, many "born fathers' do exist. These men with great capabilities of getting along with kids can do the job just as well as women, as in many other cases. Therefore, those labors which, in our prejudice, just good for women, maybe designed for them, are also equally suited for men.

In the end, although the physical differences do exist and result in some distinct abilities to do some tasks, there are many other jobs that are equally well suited for men and women, despite the prejudice about the old stereotypes of men and women. As a consequence, in so many circumstances, we should treat men and women with equal respect, requiring them for equal efforts

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...directly to their physical differences. even though these sharp differences, there a...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...others only for women. For example, men cant give birth to babies, which is simply b...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...igned for this hard task, i.e. men have no the well-suited organs to accomplish th...
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Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...men want to give birth to a child, they cant do it without the help of men. these ar...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...hey cant do it without the help of men. these are among the tasks that require specia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, of course, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 440.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79090909091 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37418537573 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418181818182 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.77710213 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.947368421 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1578947368 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285726887888 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118209157679 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532606736727 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206128077287 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168650516766 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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