The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general well-being of all its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people. To an extent, I am in agreement with the statement but it’s not true in all the cases. we have many incidents from history where nations are respected because of the achievement of their artists, scientists, rulers.
First of all what defines a great nation, though we don’t have any generic definition but in general we call a nation great where people have proper medical facilities, good education system, better infrastructure and where fundamental rights of humans flourish like “Freedom of Speech”, “Freedom of expression” and “Equality social and economic”.
but we have many incidents from past where a discovery made my scientist made the nation great and who could be best example other than Mr Jonas salk. salk discovered the medicine of polio at a time when, it was an epidemic and many new born innocent babies were getting effected from this. polio affected not only the lives of people who were affected but also of the people attached to them. but discovery made by salk was so significant that now this disease is almost eradicated from many of the countries and for some of the countries various international health organizations are helping them to eradicate.
Another example we have in front is discovery of light, bulb or say electricity by an American scientist. it’s a kind of discovery which not only changed the life of people of one place, city or nation; it changed the life of people of whole world. because of this discovery our whole prospective got changed to see the world.
There are many discoveries like (Motor Vehicles, Flying Machines, Telephones, Television) which not only changed the lives of many people but also brought socio, economic changes across the globe. because of these discoveries so many jobs got created, infrastructure got developed and eventually life of people got changed. Same is the view for artists be it ravindra nath tagore, Picasso or Leonardo da vinci or modern day artist Michael Jackson. They became source of inspiration for millions of people across the globe.
In the end, I would say a nation becomes great not only where basic needs of a human being are catered but also where art, music, science also flourish to bring positive changes on lives of people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in general, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0975 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86817777517 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5275 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2437010663 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.4375 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153205148734 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062066196429 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119536259805 0.0758088955206 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962151740812 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129619094537 0.0667264976115 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.