Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The statement here raises the controvertial issue that Men and women are not equally suited for many tasks due to inherent physical differences. I would like to agree with this statement to an extent as we have observed from our experiences that as men and women are not equable physically so there are many tasks where men outperforms women while there are also other tasks or jobs where women outperforms men. But also we have observed to some extent that there are few tasks or job where physical differences does not matters, both men and women performs equally.
Firstly, as women are more emotional than men and also they have the experince to be a mother thereby raising her kid so they can be a better fit for few jobs. To illustrate this, I would take the example of a kindergarden or primary school teaching job. As women have the experince of raising kids and they understand child emotions in a better way, so we can see that here always women holds prominent percentage of jobs and also there are more capable to outperform men here. So based on this example we can tell that the physicall differences between men and women matters in a task they perform.
Secondly, we have also observed that the physical capacity or differences between men and women matters in some fields of job like contruction industry or sports. For example we have observed that most of contruction workers are genneraly men as they can lift hevier weight and they are physcially more capable to take these ardous tasks. The same can be seen in sports, we always see that in most of the pysical sports like football or cricket men and women never competes together, there is always a different category for both, so that they can show there best potential based on their gender.And this example solidify the statement that yes physical differences between men and women play a vital role on their capability to execute a task.
Lastly, there are fields where physical differneces does not matter like in business or IT industry, we can see a equable performance of both. To illustrate this, I would like to take the example of IT indusrty, we can see here that the physical differences does not play any impact on the performance of ones. It is there mental cpability to complete a tasks effectively matters rather then their physical capabilities.
In conclusion even though some may argue that the gender does not play any role in impacting ones performance in a task but based on the examples we have discussed above we can say that it impacts where the task require phsical cabailities and not mentail like in IT industry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...tasks where men outperforms women while there are also other tasks or jobs where women outperforms m...
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'matter'
...job where physical differences does not matters, both men and women performs equally. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...ways women holds prominent percentage of jobs and also there are more capable to ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'there the best'.
Suggestion: there the best
...ategory for both, so that they can show there best potential based on their gender.And thi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
...re best potential based on their gender.And this example solidify the statement tha...
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... in business or IT industry, we can see a equable performance of both. To illustr...
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Suggestion: a task; tasks
...t is there mental cpability to complete a tasks effectively matters rather then their p...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
...lete a tasks effectively matters rather then their physical capabilities. In co...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
...der does not play any role in impacting ones performance in a task but based on the ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 456.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7850877193 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.592471662 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412280701754 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 708.3 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7457695123 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.857142857 118.986275619 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5714285714 23.4991977007 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152132110827 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713329991188 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061831268176 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917089526636 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680465543885 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.