Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
The speaker states that men and women are not equally suited for tasks that depends on physical activities. the claim made by the speaker seems to be logical at first glance .But it can't posited, as many instances tend to reciprocate this fact.
We have heard about many instances where men and women are not equally in society as well as in corporate world. But all this used to happen in ninety's.The people in present century are quite open-minded.They have accepted that women can do anything they want to irrespective of their physical appearances.
Today women are leading and progressing in fields where traditionally men were given importance.Fields such as engineering and sports proves the fact that women are capable to do things as intellectually and manually as men.In engineering, the departments like mechanical and civil used to have only male as their students as people used to think that females cant't contribute to infrastructure or invent machines as men. Now the trend has changed females tend to progress in such fields also.
If we consider the current RIO olympics there were many women who represented India in gymnastics wrestling and various other activies. Taking wrestling into consideration the women named Sakshi Malik serves the best example of triumph using her physical skills being a women. Dipa Bhatt, who represented India in gymnastics proved the same .They both bought pride and dignity to India infields which are popular to have men.
There are some scenario where women can't do manual work as strenuously as men. But we can not generalize this statement as women are now considered as one of pillars of developing nations. It is known fact that there is always a woman behind successful man ,but its time to give women credit they deserve and to treat them equally as men irrespective in which field they tend to persue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n present century are quite open-minded.They have accepted that women can do anythin...
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...s as intellectually and manually as men.In engineering, the departments like mecha...
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...females tend to progress in such fields also. If we consider the current RIO ol...
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...such fields also. If we consider the current RIO olympics there were many wom...
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...triumph using her physical skills being a women. Dipa Bhatt, who represented India in g...
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...nted India in gymnastics proved the same .They both bought pride and dignity to In...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256880733945 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.211009174312 0.157235817809 134% => OK
Adjectives: 0.085626911315 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0581039755352 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.039755351682 0.0444667217837 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119266055046 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0581039755352 0.0406280797675 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80264140668 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0428134556575 0.030933414821 138% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0519877675841 0.0997080785238 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00611620795107 0.0249443105267 25% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0244648318043 0.0148568991511 165% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1873.0 2732.02544248 69% => OK
No of words: 311.0 452.878318584 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02250803859 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318327974277 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234726688103 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157556270096 0.200843997647 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109324758842 0.132149295362 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80264140668 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578778135048 0.48968727796 118% => OK
Word variations: 63.073357419 55.4138127331 114% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 25.9166666667 23.380412469 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.6011662828 59.4972553346 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.083333333 141.124799967 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 23.380412469 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.21349557522 364% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.389335477 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.40594059406 1.64882698954 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27047690278 0.391690518653 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105002120341 0.123202303941 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0641998005606 0.077325440228 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.620590489955 0.547984918172 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134842308253 0.149214159877 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125874320965 0.161403998019 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969583029927 0.0892212321368 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.254170090878 0.385218514788 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0796480222318 0.0692045440612 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181002017803 0.275328986314 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432758455293 0.0653680567796 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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