Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The differences among men and women have long been part of curiosity to better understand human nature and capability. The promt suggests that men and women are inherntly different and hence may not be equally suited for many tasks. I definetly agree to the suggestion to a great extent due to the following reasons mentioned below in detail.
Firstly, women are definetly known for their creative and communication skills whereas men are generelised as good at maths. This may not always be the case when you compare two men and women but if we look at a consolidated sample randomlhy picked from a huge population such trends are noticed over the years through various researches.For instance, many researchers after conducting experiments on human neurology have found out that left side of the brain is more active in case of women as compared to men. On the other hand, right side of the brain is relatively more functional in case of men. The right side of the brain is helpfull in maths and complex calculations whereas left side of the brain is helpfull in understanding language and creativity better. This helped the derivation of theory, that men and women after all dont think alike and one may have an upper hand over the other inherently due to genetics while performing several tasks.
Further, the physical traits of men and women are created differently in order to fill in the gaps that are not filled by one of them. For example, if men are physically stonger, they have been great hunters and gatherers in the past. This is still the case considered in many professions such as army and sports.Due to these physical differences men and women compete in disparate teams in olympics. Hence, men may be great at some physical activities, but women are also great at the other activities such as nursing, cooking and designing due to their advantage in creative skills over men.Also , women are noted to have a great sense of detail that make them efficient at any task involving analysis or research. Hence historically, humans have benefited from these differences and one gender in this society that is meant to co-exist.
Neverthless, there are various occupations that do not require any differentiation on the basis of gender such as management or research. While it is true, that male and female may not be genetically or physically similar but such differences play a vital role in such professions. For instance, various organisations these days are very strict on maintaing the ratio of male and female workers in the workplace because both the genders think differently. This difference in thinking comes up as a better combination than just one gender being dominant in a certain team. This is noted to be the result of various points where male brain is not as efficient as female brain and hence an amulgum of both tends to complement each other while solving complex problems and coming up with out of the box solutions.
In conclusion, though men and women have their brains wired in a manner different from each other, it definetly comes as an advantage in some professions to have both. Whereas, the argument that these difference do make some tasks more suitable for females than males and vise versa holds water and if these differences are utilized to its maximum capacity then we can achive new heights in out work cutlure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2796.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 571.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89667250438 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7259522534 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474605954466 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 899.1 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8799533026 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.55 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.21951772744 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206534498032 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068922719964 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493250778601 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12577288039 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449853092163 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, so, still, then, whereas, while, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2796.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 571.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89667250438 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7259522534 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474605954466 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 899.1 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8799533026 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.55 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.21951772744 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206534498032 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068922719964 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493250778601 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12577288039 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449853092163 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.