Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

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Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.

The argument raises the controversial issue of whether "Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks or not?".Indisputably,in many jobs which includes welding,factory works ,blast furnaces women cannot work equally with men and tasks which includes washing clothes ,nursing ,baby sitting etc men cannot work comfortably just like women do.Nevertheless,the above is not true for many cases which includes tasks/jobs like software engineering,marketing,fashion designing,management works etc men and women are equally contributing in their own perspective.So,I generally disagree with the opinion that "Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks" and would argue that ,"Both men and women are equally suited for many tasks".

First of all,i would like to point out that the issue "Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks" is a stereotype which must be overcome.To illustrate this ,let us look in the example of the company "Google", where the ratio of working women and men is almost equal and they are contributing to the success of the company equally and we all know that presently Google is the top most company in the world.

Furthermore and Specifically the CEOS of both multinational companies like" Yahoo and Pepsi co " are women.So ,both personal experience and physical evidence states that women are equally suited with men in many jobs.

Admittedly,in some areas like blast furnaces ,factory works,mining etc the physical differences between men and women plays a prominent role .so the point "Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks" is true only at certain areas and applications.However,the above argument constitute a sufficient support to claim that "Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks
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In conclusion,although physical differences plays a certain role between men and women to to certain kind of jobs,it is not the sufficient statement or a fiat that is readily accepted.As long as some measurements are performed ,or some areas are involved though men and women have physical differences they the contributing equally to the society.In fact it is much true.

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'first of all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265957446809 0.240241500013 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.121276595745 0.157235817809 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0914893617021 0.0880659088768 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0765957446809 0.0497285424764 154% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0276595744681 0.0444667217837 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112765957447 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.031914893617 0.0406280797675 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.70454185928 2.79330140395 133% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0127659574468 0.030933414821 41% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00212765957447 0.0016655270985 128% => OK
Determiners: 0.068085106383 0.0997080785238 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0106382978723 0.0249443105267 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0127659574468 0.0148568991511 86% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2468.0 2732.02544248 90% => OK
No of words: 370.0 452.878318584 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.67027027027 6.0361032391 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383783783784 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.324324324324 0.280924506359 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227027027027 0.200843997647 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148648648649 0.132149295362 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70454185928 2.79330140395 133% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42972972973 0.48968727796 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.2946842546 55.4138127331 80% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 74.0 23.380412469 317% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 211.860708958 59.4972553346 356% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 493.6 141.124799967 350% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.0 23.380412469 317% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.4 0.674092028746 356% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.21349557522 633% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 106.432432432 51.4728631049 207% => OK
Elegance: 1.82075471698 1.64882698954 110% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.607859580763 0.391690518653 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.362576852747 0.123202303941 294% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0558385317912 0.077325440228 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.79018083652e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.43971673671 0.161403998019 272% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176581655109 0.0892212321368 198% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.432563024945 0.385218514788 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0521838750305 0.0692045440612 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.444111163895 0.275328986314 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181918492649 0.0653680567796 278% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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