Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
This topic raises the controversial issue of whether "television has destroyed communication among friends and family or not". Indisputably, due to the influence of this technological era some people especially children are getting addicted to the televisions and senile people who can't able to move from one place to other took televison as a source of entertainment are becoming victims for the negative effects of television. Nevertheless,majority of the people in the world enjoys the positive side of television because the main purpose of any invention is to ease the life of the people not to destroy it.
Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion of "negative effects of television on communication among people", and would argue that Television has more positive effects on people's life.
First of all, I would like to point out that television is just an alternative source of entertainment and not primary.To illustrate this let us took the example of a person who works all the day and comes home,generally prefers to talk to his wife and play with his kids but not to enjoy some shows or channels in the televison,also many point out that In this modern age the communication between people is decreasing day by day I don't think that this is because of only televisoin but because of the work tensions,pressures and deadlines. So there is no point in blaming television for the destruction of communication.
Secondly, television is helping people in more positive ways such as providing weather reports from weather forecasting channels, live news report, entertainment etc.
From the above mentioned positives of television both commonsence and personal evidence has told us that there are many ways televisoin eased the personal life of many citizens.
Admittedly, for some children whose parents are employees, they may consider television as the source of entertainment and time passing subject tends to get addicted to televisoin and senile people who cant go anywhere due to their ageing consequences gets addicted to television and becoming socially inactive are the main victims
and gets socially inactive.However, the above argument doen't constitue a sufficient support to claim that " Television has destroyed communication among friends and family.",because now a days many tv programs are helping children to do their homeworks and helping them in their studies.
In conclusion,although television may have some negetive effects such as addiction,as long as some measurements are performed we can say that television has less role in destructing the communication among family and children and he main reasons are like I mentioned above it is the work tensions,deadlines and cultural change that effects he communication but not television.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'as to', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279591836735 0.229887763892 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.151020408163 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0734693877551 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0510204081633 0.046263068375 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0367346938776 0.0685040099705 54% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122448979592 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0367346938776 0.0351676179071 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.50876214637 2.67179642975 131% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0326530612245 0.0309702414327 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00408163265306 0.00188951952338 216% => OK
Determiners: 0.0938775510204 0.0887237588012 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0102040816327 0.0209618222197 49% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102040816327 0.0139019557991 73% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2811.0 2387.08602151 118% => OK
No of words: 437.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.43249427918 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.363844393593 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.315789473684 0.251872472559 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.237986270023 0.174417080927 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173913043478 0.112833075102 154% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50876214637 2.67179642975 131% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489702517162 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.7593603721 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6684587814 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 43.7 20.5533526081 213% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 174.107323223 48.84282405 356% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.1 120.699889404 233% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.7 20.5533526081 213% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.5 0.644075263715 233% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.5376344086 176% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.54480286738 343% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 75.2789473684 45.7405998639 165% => OK
Elegance: 1.83760683761 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282815802549 0.300154397459 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.16566102185 0.103427244359 160% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0791859838392 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.859813846086 0.497263757937 173% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.207289273549 0.151897553556 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149363324398 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990965487124 0.0781384742642 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.197350826093 0.336927656856 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0977017967635 0.067059652881 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167637083838 0.210909579961 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857890756871 0.0618886996521 139% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8870967742 34% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.