Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The university is very important part of the student life. every child wants to receive the best education. While some students are encouraged to learn more for better grades, other don't agree with that. I believe that the marks really encourage the students to study more. I will explore my reasons in the nexts paragraphs.
To begin with, everyone wants to have a good marks in the college or university. when the marks are not so good you begin to study more and more to receive the wanted result. Actually the university of Sofia published that 68 percent of the students who receive bad grades, started to study more and better their results. Wren I was in the university I had a very hard for my exam and tha's way I did not pass the exam from the first try. I had to spend more time in studying instead of make more pleasure things. However next time when I went to this exam I received the best mark and I was so proud with me. The reason that I did to take the exam from my first try is that way I learn more than I wanted for the second try. I believe that every student want to receive good marks and then he feels satisfied. if he did not succeed he study more.
second the good marks are important for tu career. some of the best companies want to see your diploma and the grades inside before you start to be their employee. according to that the students learn more.
Finally the good grades are important for students which receive some money from their parents or some scholarship. Moreover some of the parents don't want to pay for the education of their child if they do not have good marks. according to that the high schools stop to send scholarship to this students which were failed on the exams.this is the other reason which encourage the students to learn more.
To sum up having a good marks is better than fail on the exam. For that reason the students have to study more and to improve their knowledge. The bad marks encourage them.
To sum up I believe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, while, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45257452575 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23454840441 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411924119241 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2747866825 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4583333333 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190305438797 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661822066488 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518165576433 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139584054454 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386855973202 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 8.01818996416 76% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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